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Elusive Dreams

Rainbow dreams elusively drift out of sight, slipping through reality's stark fingers, never fully grasped. 7/8/12

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Date: 8/14/2012 1:06:00 PM

Love it! Hope I can do one half as wonderful. :) Tanya

Date: 7/13/2012 6:07:00 PM

and that the way it is.

Date: 7/13/2012 2:09:00 PM

Great one..Very expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Date: 7/13/2012 1:59:00 PM

a wonderful poem Kim...thanks for sharing...hugs..Joseph

Date: 7/11/2012 6:43:00 AM

beautiful :-)

Date: 7/9/2012 5:25:00 PM

nice one, kim! very beautifully expressed...

Date: 7/9/2012 10:39:00 AM

beautiful write, Kim - interesting form too (I must try it)

Date: 7/8/2012 8:50:00 PM

KIm, i love your verse...pd

Date: 7/8/2012 8:48:00 PM

Reality should be more kind! I seem to dream in black and white. I love your shadorma! gwendolen

Date: 7/8/2012 7:39:00 PM

this shadorma is SUPERB. Wish I'd thought of this!!

Date: 7/8/2012 6:24:00 PM

Lovely poem; rainbows are slippery things.