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Eleventh, March

A sigh escapes still, immune to overt silence, unabashed...justified Another teardrop enters the infinite pool of resilience, uplifting...reinforcing Another hand empathizes-- touching, impulsively putting one's heart unto wounds, alleviating pain enfolding memories into paper, ostensibly vigilant Unborn dreams awaiting fruition. empty streets, impacted pieces: occupied lives, unwavering spirits Arighting the entropy-- "Not Impossible!" Heaves Obstacled Nation -- Untiring, Persevering! A lone emboldened seed is planted, objectifying hope, ushering life amidst rubble, engaging tenacity inherently within overburdened, yet undauntable voices Ardently surging, emerging from insidious waves of chaos, ultimately touching azure Time effortlessly moves, insensitive to ordeals nonetheless, undoubtedly healing... As wings echo distantly, irradiated winds oscillate blush unfurling light... Arise, Sun! Embrace the illuminated blossom. Orbit Love's universe. 0330040203042013 11th March 2011 **It has been two years since Japan encountered such a devastating triple tragedy of the earthquake in Tohoku, tsunami and the Fukushima nuclear plant disaster... They are still slowly picking up the pieces, so much needs to be done, so many are still displaced, uncertain of their futures, of their lives... hopefully they are not forgotten. It may take long, long years, but I honestly believe Japan can rise over this, I honestly hope so. ****Thank you David for this enjoyable challenge. It has pushed me to approach this topic in a way that I would have never thought of on my own....

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Date: 12/25/2013 11:30:00 PM
Happy Holidays Nikko..., I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:51:00 PM
Hi Nikko,,, , congrats on your winning poem *** Always & Forever ***LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 3:58:00 PM
awesome win............... B. P.iNk.............SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:24:00 AM
I am soooo glad to see this amazing poem gets recognized as the beauty it is........not to mention the unbelievable difficultly that was so easily overcome using the con/vow challenge. You are in my awe......this is beautiful !!
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:30:00 PM
Congrats on a smashing win Nikko love xx
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Date: 4/29/2013 12:27:00 PM
What happened to David, this is David Williams.. right... Have not seen him around. If you have contact with him please tell him hi...xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/28/2013 5:44:00 PM
Nikko, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 4/19/2013 1:03:00 PM
This is a stunning write. You write so well, too my dear friend Enn! thanks for sharing your amazing talent! Thank you so much again for stopping by and for another nice comments on one of my poems. Thanks for showing empathy about my dad. Have a great weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/18/2013 11:42:00 AM
You entered this contest too, I see. So did I, but yours is....well....astounding. MEGA TALENT!! And Im glad you found my face at last...haha. Yes, that's my daughter. She was making a silly face after I put a rubber spider on her head.
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:34:00 PM
Nikko, I am always amazed at the profoundness of your writing. This moving piece touches the heart and helps us remember past events that so many are still coping with while trying to heal. Truly a beautiful write. I am missing you at PFT. too. hugs, Lotus
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Date: 4/8/2013 11:33:00 AM
ah......my sweet 'enn pee' once again your heart pours compassion...and even in this difficult challenge, you made it seamless and effortless with beautiful poetry..unique as always..reminding me of the paper cranes that brought me to tears. This contest also reminded me of your clever twist while sponsoring challenges that always had my head spinning....I would always mess up!! LOL !! I wish you were still here, but glad you have found a life outside the Soup!!Thanks for staying in touch! xoxo
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:29:00 AM
Just excellent!Perhaps best of the lot (of this contest).A great topic to write on.You are missed here!
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:17:00 AM
hey ENN PEE, hahaha. I really hope you will go to youtube and type in bonanza theme song. You gotta see this handsome clan. And how cool, you got your ending for your poem!
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:06:00 AM
Definitely a new chapter, I feel comfortable posting it now I guess. That says it all lol :)
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:00:00 AM
Missy, can you believe I wrote that one last year sometime.. Never got around to posting it.. Thank you for stopping by. Hope your weekend's been a good one :) ?mwahugs?
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:43:00 PM
immensely gripping stuff! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/5/2013 11:26:00 AM
Wow what a corker, he really does set a challenge doesn't he... thanks for your lovely comments on the Mole, and yes love, doing well, hope you are and watch out for the other moles, they are doozy's xx
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Date: 4/5/2013 4:25:00 AM
David needs the last wotf with U..Maybe love and unity?: ) Im soooi happy you re back..You re one of thode friends who always touch my heary wiyh words..Like a tsunami you swollow my being into your joutneys.I do hope they rise up over thr disaster too dear
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 4/5/2013 8:17:00 AM
Thank you as well for you suggestions Charma-- was thinking universe, ah not really sure... you also touch my heart, I hope you know that and I just knew adorable Christina was with you :)!! Give her a kiss for me please! Yes, I hope with you when it comes to the Japanese rising above all this...
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Date: 4/5/2013 4:26:00 AM
sorry for typos Christina s fault..i meant you touch my heart
Date: 4/4/2013 8:42:00 PM
just say Love ALWAYS. This is excellent, Nikko. you were SO inspired, so don't let one little thing wreck it. I am sure you can think of a better word than always. But one little word to finish this. I had such a struggle with the first challenge of this type, i just did not want to try it again. It is just too "forced" for me. but you made it flow effortlessly and made it look like true poetry. Super talented you are, my little "enn pee" hahaha LUV YA. And it's awesome to find you here!!!!
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 4/5/2013 8:14:00 AM
"my little enn pee"-- ah that made me smile, that was sweet, somehow made me think of "My Little Pony" -- you familiar with that? thanks for your suggestions sweetie, but I need a "u" word--- can I use "UGGGHHH"! I have to rework the latter part of that line, not sure how? thinking, thinking....love back to you and happy to drop by here :)!!
Date: 4/4/2013 8:42:00 PM
enter it enter it enter it!! And double check the rule if you have to have a certain number of words per line. In his last contest, I think he wanted at least six words per line but maybe that was not a rule this time.
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Date: 4/4/2013 11:56:00 AM
Let me bug you; that was long hey, but then again we are on the same page when it comes to writing lol *mwahugs*
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Date: 4/4/2013 11:40:00 AM
Ps: I am sure this will make David smile even if you dont get to enter it into his contes ;)
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Date: 4/4/2013 11:39:00 AM
Missy! I enjoyed reading this gem of yours, was not my intention to pop my head in here but now I am glad I did. How are things going with you? I almost forgot about these events, you just reminded me of them ;) hope your Friday is a fabulous one and enjoy the weekend ahead *mwahugs*
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