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Dysfunctional Talk II

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Dysfunctional Talk II

Suddenly you change:
Run away from us
Close your mind pensive
You are here but far from here.

Darkness surrounds me
Emptiness in your eyes
Silent looks talk to me
Voiceless words slip away

What is it?
You OK?

What is it?
You should know
No, I don’t
You don’t care.

My eyes stop crying
My heart stops suffering
My mouth stops talking
My mind stops thinking.

Suddenly we change:
I feel your anger
You feel my solitude
We feel our unity. 

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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:00:00 PM
    very good write on some relationships ;}

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:13:00 PM
    Patrizia, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD

    Cohen Avatar Patrizia Cohen
    Date: 11/23/2012 1:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much and happ Holidays to you and your family too. Patrizia