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Dreams - An Iota of Hope

A poem based on relationship…”A girl in her own dreams” wrote by Mrs.Madhavi :) DREAMS - An Iota of HOPE “Waked up 7 :00 am in the morning.. saw my beauteous dreams transforming.. ohh yeah..with a drowsiness yawning.. Suddenly I found myself refreshing. Excitedly Gone near by emblazoned window.. Fearfully Viewed a gloomy shadow.. Suddenly he smiled at me through haze of smoke.. Like a fantastic sizzling coke.. Soothing music on its full swing .. Like a glittering diamond in the ring.. He ought to give me red rose.. On his bended knees he bows.. He tickled on my pierced nose.. With which I got glaciatedly froze.. Like a tempting dark fantasy chocolate melting in the mouth.. We strongly decided and took a royalistic oath.. He Embraced his hand on my shoulders.. Which Got intact like file and folders… Like the moon shines in the sparkling night.. Enduringly felt to hug him so tight.. Dazzling Eyes immersed in each other.. Tuned together like a romantic lover.. Every nerve of us conjoined together.. Because the love lasted forever..forever… Suddenly a glimpse of sun came and shattered all my zestful dreams.. “”Ohhhh.. ohhhh No..Not again. Not again. No more illustrations. No one can dwell my heart like you. Please come back. No more dreams please..”” . Yep this feeling arised at once and will be still till our last breathe. Lasting forever. Just forever.. We trapped in each other’s heart and now no one dare to break our love-life’s part.. Apart.. Love is the essence of life and it is measured not by the count of breathe we take..but by the moments we share together till our last breathe.. By, Madhavi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/29/2014 9:35:00 PM
Nice to read your first Poem on PS. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/5/2015 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Ravindra. ##Mads
Date: 7/14/2013 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 8/29/2013 2:44:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thanks for highlighting my poem..hugs...love ## madhavi
Date: 7/12/2013 12:22:00 PM
very good poem rhymed so nicely the flow is nice too .. i like it
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 9/8/2013 12:11:00 PM
Hi wahab, Please Go through my new poem..I hope you may enjoy it..@madhavi http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=502244
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 7/12/2013 12:34:00 PM
Hi buddy, thanks for appreciating my poem. From: M.S.P.
Date: 6/29/2013 4:12:00 PM
Hi Madhavi, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 6/30/2013 7:01:00 AM
Hi skat, Thanks for your lovely comments. Feeled so happy now And I am quite lucky to have you as a friend..View my other poems as well dear..be in touch..God bless.. lots of hugs..tcr
Date: 6/26/2013 11:02:00 PM
Madhavi, enjoyed your first poem on the soup... -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 6/30/2013 7:09:00 AM
Hi linda, Thanks for the appreciation for my poem.Will surely like to participate in your contest.Will be the luckiest one to express myself in your contest.Quite blessed to be the part of this poetry family..B in touch..take care..also Please go through my other poems as well dear and your comments are most welcome..God bless.

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