Dream On-2

Dream on

Be it white rabbit holes of wonderlands
Or black holes  of never-here flounder lands ,
Dreaming on and on
Vaunted  webs they  spawn
In  this ‘ uni-verse’ that ever expands*.

Expanding like vapor, fluff and  free verse
In eccentric  quest,  new frontiers traverse
Dreamlands roaming
Ideas beaming
Procreating,  creating  things diverse.

Diverse, like what is extant, are  all stuff
From the  nutsy-feverish  heads of buffs
Their ways are damn strange
Their worlds  like deranged
Salt of earth, they are, above all rebuff.

Kneading up, weeding and leading the earth
Right , left or centre  , ever, two cents worth
Although they  grandstand
And get praised or panned
Of their wisdom, world should not be in dearth.


*Science tells  that the universe keeps on expanding by itself.
Black hole is a region in space- time whose gravity field is too strong for anything including light to escape from it.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
22 jul 2013,   Limerick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/6/2013 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Jag!!
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:50:00 AM
a wonderful win Jag:-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:25:00 PM
Cleverly done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:55:00 PM
Jag, Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... xox~ Linda
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Date: 7/29/2013 12:59:00 PM
love where you took this, comparing hollow space to the wonders of the universe... extraordinary, jag!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:32:00 PM
Interesting limericks, my friend. I like the way you expounded on the universe.
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Date: 7/26/2013 5:22:00 PM
nice one! (:)
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Date: 7/26/2013 2:54:00 PM
This was so energetic and thought provoking... Great to read.
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