Don'T Leave Me Hanging

Don't leave me hanging sis!


I came out of nowhere with an agenda on the mind
Joining the soup to be near my favorite love
a game I did not plan to play
Until he called upon the first round.
giving it my best shot
Then came round three and more. 
The poets here I started to explore
Not taking my poetry seriously
The writing just happens naturally
now I see why she visits everyone at the soup.
My sister who puts on a show with words
Is adored by her very own group
the Destroyer was my pet name 
She gave me when I was young
So envious of her, I broke the head of her only dolls.
using her poetry was the way she tortured me 
Inside me, she bestowed a poet of mischief
Now I like to tease everyone mind with words


I hate this poem..... Lol..don't read it... It was a joking way back then


(((for contest**Leave me hanging)))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/13/2015 12:18:00 PM
**taps foot** And why wouldn't I read this Linda? I don't have any sisters...just two annoying brothers. Excellent write you have yourself here. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 12/2/2013 7:39:00 AM
You need to be called the Poet Creator. I'm sure your not a destroyer any more. I look forward to reading more of your older poems They give me insight into who you are as a person....Hugs.... Roger
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:52:00 PM
sisters,, I have 3 of them,,,, nice write,, glad you liked my soul sucker ,,,, you have a great day Linda ;}
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Date: 3/20/2013 10:39:00 PM
This was a breath of fresh air to read. So different and intriguing! I never would have thought you to at one point look at poetry so negatively... funny how things change and as you read more and more you become unintentionally moved by it... so much that you wish to start your own movement. This was such an OPEN read... it's amazing when people can climb out of their holes and spill out all theirs beans for the whole to see... so effortlessly! (sorry for rhyming so much... wasn't intended!)
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:36:00 AM
Sweet p.d has left me hanging, hope Royal is ok. harry
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:10:00 PM
so nice p.d....you are the best.....
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week P.D.. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2012 12:50:00 PM
Thy sister's name be, Woman. Better yet, Just Human. This poem got posted because it communicates. Communication is a prime ingredient of poetry. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/3/2012 1:54:00 PM
Congrats P.D. on being featured this week.
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Date: 1/3/2012 6:25:00 AM
How can the soup post this poem...on their featured poems.... Gosh now I wonder how random they are.... This was a joke way back than.... Gurrrrrr
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Date: 8/4/2010 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations, p.D and NOW can we finally let the cat out of the bag and let everyone know who your sister is? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congrats P.D. my BBF on your big win in Gareth's Leave me hanging contest.. a great story written so well and another wonderful win for u to enjoy... thankxxx for your fantastic comments on my poetry yesterday.. your BBF with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations PD on your win in Gareth James's contest "Leave Me Hanging". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:34:00 PM
Powerful poem from your pen. I liked it.
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Date: 5/2/2010 1:37:00 PM
wow your on the top hundreds... congrats=)
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:04:00 AM
Enjoyable read PD, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:18:00 AM
haha's and boohoo's but definitely a bit of everything describe, very much like your way of writing, and congrats on your HM n.n
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Date: 4/30/2010 7:43:00 PM
geeez, P.d look how many hits you got with this one!! I think I never said congratulations. Going thru contests finally. It's the weekend, ya know. So happy you got in the winner circle. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:36:00 PM
Well Well Well congrats my BBF P.D. on your HM in Amy's contest for wishes as your wishes were wonderful to read about..enjoy that honor bestowed on u my BBF... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/29/2010 5:48:00 AM
How I wish your wishes come true,PD! I hope I'm right that this is about your sister as well--hopefully she reads this and that you will be reunited with her...best of luck with this and with the contest!
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:15:00 PM
Ah, yes, a really wonderful poem. I think we all would like to have three wishes sometimes. I probably need more than three!!! I loved the last line, that said it all. Great write.
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:22:00 AM
Your style of poetry is diferent, humor mixed with story telling, then again it doesn't sound like your being humerous on purpose, you can tell your a very sarcastic person dependng on what your talkin bout or writing about. I mean that in a good way, it shines in your poetry. Have a great morning or night.:) check out my new poem too, A Vain Time Is Coming!
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:42:00 PM
Dear poet destroyer, A very fine Poem for Amy's Contest but I wonder if You followed the criteria for the ContestOne thing Amy said was You couldn't wish someone back alive as I read this I see maybe You are trying to bring Yourself back alive to continue to destroy the one Your Heart truely Loved and also bring her back alive (as i'm sure she feels dead towards You) Good Luck in the Contest ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 4/27/2010 4:50:00 PM
How very sweet.
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Date: 4/27/2010 4:23:00 PM
Great write... sibling rivalry always difficult...I see it between my boys...they are like chalk and cheese and hardly speak but one day they will be close, I just know it...good luck in the contest PD, and many thanks for reading mine and your comments always appreciated...Allie
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