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Don't judge that stripper, her name is Jane

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Don't judge that stripper, her name is Jane

The girl whispered how gross she’s a stripper she has no pride
Her friend replies I bet when she goes off stage she spreads her legs ever so wide
Look at her she’s such an idiot looking all lost
I bet she’s looking for her first day’s client, pimp, or boss
Oh God why is that whore looking near this door
I silently roar, Would you please not talk about her any more
Yes she’s a stripper but her class surpasses either one of your asses
Yes her job is exotic but your judgment is naively chaotic
Everyone’s not as fortunate as you two and we have to make ends meet
That strippers name is Jane and she’s ever so sweet
So despite your negative comments a stripper she is still to be
But silence for the moment because she’s a charmer and she’s with me

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  1. Date: 3/1/2009 3:21:00 PM
    LOL...She is a charmer and she is with me.. James, my id it up with this the flow of the piece and the last line made me laugh..good write.

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 3:08:00 PM
    The title got me interested...and the last line cracked me up!! I had a good friend who was a stripper in college...She's the owner of two Master's payed for by some fellas appreciative to her "class". Who's laughing now? She is!! Right on, Write on!! Steve

  1. Date: 3/1/2009 2:41:00 PM
    Good for you, James! Only God should be our judge. I like the way you told them off; they deserved it! Great write, Carolyn