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Destiny's Ecstasy-Collab

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Destiny's Ecstasy-Collab

You may find destiny's ecstasy, that you searched for all your days Cut free from your bonds of sorrow,and sadness burnt up in a blaze For when the ashes and fog arise,happiness reveals its ways The familiar face in the mirror, will be happy with your gaze To stay on course in life you must keep the right frame of mind Think not only of yourself but of the others you may find Look at yourself as a stranger that you've met for the very first time Notice the sadness,and sorrow that you keep hidden away inside Hard enough as it is, you've got to just pull yourself upright For some circumstances in daily life, are hard to see in light Sometimes you have to look into a mirror,and focus with all your might To see what you may find hidden within,takes so much more than sight
A beautiful collab with Laura Breidenthal & Danny K 11-25-12

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  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:10:00 PM
    I love the way this reads Dan.... you and Laura did a fine job;} have a great day.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:31:00 AM
    Oh this is very good. Resonates with me alot. Great poem Dan and Laura :-) x

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:20:00 PM
    Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Hi Danny Boy great collab here love the words well done both, all the best Owen, soup mail

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:21:00 AM
    excellent collab, from you both, i find this so inspiring, and beautiful....

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Hi Dan, read this and Laura And you have done a fine job in getting one to take stock of oneself, very nicely done, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:50:00 PM
    Yay! (8 Thanks for the comment ;) Heheh--glad you made the switch. Looks MUCH better. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Great collab with you and Laura! I especially liked that part of looking at yourself as a stranger...etc.Awesome job you two:-)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Yes, it's gorgeous ..... thanks to you both! Wishing you a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / /f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:15:00 PM
    i think we all look at our reflections and see things we don't like, but rarely ever see ourselves as if through someone else's eyes...love the advice in this we;; drafted poem!