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Defeated Suicide- I Love You Mom

She wept undefeated in the game life Bitterly victorious to breath once more She murmurs thoughts of a shattered mind Tears course routes within wrinkles of time Yet she smiles, murmuring the unknown I watch as my all begins to withdrawal Reminiscing her tender contentment with life Contagious tears uncover my artificial strength Why? Why must the only thing I love want to leave Why torment the mind an angel Why is the only reply i should imply to God, Jesus, or whoever is listening Why? I love you mom, get well soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/18/2009 6:54:00 PM
So very sad and heartfelt..I pray for you and your Mother!! A brave write.. Hugs, Robin
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Date: 3/18/2009 9:43:00 AM
So touching the poem presents me with a private moment shared reveal. The rhythm is exactly as I would breathe. Peace!
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Date: 3/18/2009 4:14:00 AM
This is poem from the heart brother..so much love flowing with the whys in this piece..thanks for the love and compliment James...we are on the same path..much love brother.
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Date: 3/17/2009 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful write for your mother. So heart wrenching and loving. Extremely well written. Peace, Love, Light and Good Health be with you and yours. Smiles from Lolita
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