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Defeated Suicide- I love you mom

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Defeated Suicide- I love you mom

She wept undefeated in the game life
Bitterly victorious to breath once more
She murmurs thoughts of a shattered mind
Tears course routes within wrinkles of time 
Yet she smiles, murmuring the unknown

I watch as my all begins to withdrawal 
Reminiscing her tender contentment with life
Contagious tears uncover my artificial strength
Why must the only thing I love want to leave
Why torment the mind an angel 
Why is the only reply i should imply to God, Jesus, or whoever is listening

I love you mom, get well soon.

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  1. Date: 3/18/2009 6:54:00 PM
    So very sad and heartfelt..I pray for you and your Mother!! A brave write.. Hugs, Robin

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 9:43:00 AM
    So touching the poem presents me with a private moment shared reveal. The rhythm is exactly as I would breathe. Peace!

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 4:14:00 AM
    This is poem from the heart much love flowing with the whys in this piece..thanks for the love and compliment James...we are on the same path..much love brother.

  1. Date: 3/17/2009 10:54:00 PM
    Beautiful write for your mother. So heart wrenching and loving. Extremely well written. Peace, Love, Light and Good Health be with you and yours. Smiles from Lolita