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deep-dark-hollowed heart

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deep-dark-hollowed heart

I stand 
I wait
I worried
for the things that may not happened

I hope
I pray
I cried
longing for a peaceful heart

All I wanted is...
when i close my eyes I won't feel afraid
and when I open my eyes, a smile will appear 
coz today i breathe again

in a deep-dark-hollowed heart
like living as a sinner
like walking around in a forest finding a way out
God, released me from this feeling...

Nobody wants to feel alone
like a stranger in a crowded place
take me to a home where love can hold me
to a nice sleep when the night comes

I am lost so find me
I cry so hug me
I am lonely so love me...

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Moving! No amount of wealth, influence or power can compensate for love. All the best, Peter 14/7/13

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 11:43:00 AM
    "All you need is love,love....." - Touching poem Mony. - oxox Big hug from Anne-Lise

    Reyna Avatar Mony Reyna
    Date: 9/25/2012 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    right... everything needs love. thanx for your comment
  1. Date: 10/3/2011 9:06:00 AM
    I believe that this is even deeper sadness than the poem even indicates..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn...Many homes are not a safe place for the children or the wife..I hope that this is not your life..Sara

    Reyna Avatar Mony Reyna
    Date: 10/3/2011 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well, i write this not because of any fear of someone but fear for not achieving.. i won't say i fear for life but there are problems in my life i need to solve. a nice home for me is more like a dream i need to fulfill. so thanx so much for reading my poem. i always like to write poems but i gotta know that English is my second language. so your comments is valuable for me.
  1. Date: 8/8/2011 10:30:00 AM
    a sad poem, with a charming finish i like this good poetry

    Reyna Avatar Mony Reyna
    Date: 10/3/2011 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank youuuuu....