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Dedicated To... (Rap Verse)

This is dedicated to
the uneducated who,
segregate from the greats
the hate gave integration to,
though the paved the way for you,
you just simulate the flu,
infected with cold hearts
like inflammation made it through,

So take a second to converse,
listen to me, then speak,
just make sure you think first,
about the thirst, of the dream,
had by Dr. King, which would
hurt beyond the seams, if he 
witnessed everything,
The Scenes!

How we're treating one another,
Educated versus thugs, like
we are not brothers, What's the
point to jump from slavery to 
having white lovers, if less racism 
means the blacks hate each other?
My Brothers! I have no intent on
hating you, I just hope you make it
through. So this is Dedicated To

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  1. Date: 11/7/2010 4:44:00 PM
    Thought provoking piece. If everyone judged less and understood more, what a wonderful world it would be. Keep on sharing your words. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good week. Karen

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 6:58:00 PM
    wow! now that is some thought,,, really your last stanza was like wow!!! ~What's the point to jump from slavery to having white lovers, if less racism means the blacks hate each other~ this line rocks with truth well all words around it does. by the way that one slam you read was for a fellow souper,,lol,, of course i had to remove his name. He liked attacking females like me,,, what a poet wimp... thanks for the comments.. later,.awesome rap,,,.p.d.

  1. Date: 11/4/2010 3:51:00 PM
    First I must say thanks for saying such nice things about my poem. 22nd my friend your words in this write are right from your heart, it shows so clearly through your work. And this weekend I propmise to sit down crack a beer and read the rest of your art. Later Michael

  1. Date: 11/4/2010 1:05:00 AM
    Very interesting topic, Audonus. Powerful first stanza! Your write is quite good. Enjoyed reading you. Emilia

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 11:09:00 PM
    Snaps Mr. Taylor... Snaps!

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 7:58:00 PM
    a very well written rap, with a real powerful message,,great one,,I did a search and found you on myspace since you had some of the same poems posted there,,now i have a face and other words to value and relate too,,It is again my pleasure to meet and read your words,,and again,,Thank You for taking the time to read and comment upon mine,,,Blessings..Cecil