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Creature Comfort-Collab With Deb Wilson

In the midst of the dewdrops that sparkle the morning the bluebird of happiness sang without warning. Basking in the sun of a new day's light then spreading it's wings for a first day flight. The sun grew so large in the painted sky while creatures stirred in the forest nearby. Frolicking in the shadows the animals play in search of new adventures that may come their way. They stop and they sniff as humans come near to their woodland home but they feel no fear. As the dewdrops fade into afternoon delight the evening comes a calling with a beautiful starlit night. The furry ones scurry towards peaceful repose. In the forest they'll sleep till the morning light glows. Peace and love flourish in this forest all day long. May your mind enjoy the beauty before it's all gone.
7-15-13 Thanks Deb... I enjoyed working on this with you as well...

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Date: 8/9/2013 10:12:00 PM
AWESOME ,,, all I got to say ;} now I must read Debbie's version, if she has one ;}
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Date: 7/16/2013 7:12:00 AM
I can't tell where you start and she ends, artfully done by both of you.
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Date: 7/16/2013 3:19:00 AM
Full of peace - tranquility - harmony - life....well done!...Shaz
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Date: 7/16/2013 3:03:00 AM
I must say...there is a certain enchantment in every line of this piece. You both did a fantastic job in helping us see this magical place where there is harmony between man and God's creation....Beautiful. I applaud you both!
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