Constant Dark Rain, Sturzregen, Aguacero

Pouring from leaden clouds
Flooding houses and gardens
A constant dark rain


Aus bleiernen Wolken
Flut in Häusern und Gärten
Endloser Sturzregen


De nubes plomizas
Inundando casas y jardines
Continuo aguacero
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/24/2011 5:58:00 AM
Hi Gert - This is a wonderful haiku. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this great work..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:30:00 PM
Pop in and take the prize why don't ya LOL, so nice to see you #1. Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:37:00 PM
Brilliant Gert, these are sure number ones. congrats. Harry
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Gert. Your poetry is always loaded with imagery!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:58:00 PM
Bravo, Gert! First place for a first-rate poem! Congratulations, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations dear Gert, on your well deserved win with this very powerful haiku. Lainie
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Gert
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:14:00 PM
Gert, Congratulations on your win with this haunting image, which these days could be the news! Well done.
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:17:00 AM
This Dark Rain sure is doing the rounds Gert. Many congrats on your 1st place win in SKAT's contest....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with the wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Gert. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:14:00 AM
This has happened recently in Australia...indeed a dark rain and a dark time. Congratulations, Gert!
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:35:00 AM
Big congrats Gert my friend on a stunning win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry ... enjoy that top spot where the air is as rare as your magnificent poem luv..
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Gert sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:47:00 AM
A well deserved 1st place win my friend...
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:20:00 AM
Gert 'n asemrowende uitsig.. Veels Geluk met jou eerste plek :) Wilma
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:03:00 AM
Congrats Gert on your 1st place win with this wonderful Haiku!
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Date: 1/16/2011 10:07:00 PM
wow! love the win gert, congratulations,..p.d.
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations Gert. Looks as though dark rain is the same in any language. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Gert !on your awesome#! thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:24:00 PM
A perfect description of rain Gert and hope u enter it into the Haiku contest.. such a great piece of expression luv.. good luck my friend.. enjoyed this rain..tonight with luv..
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:58:00 PM
Gert you should enter this in that haiku contest and just say a constant dark rain to fit in the word dark. Maybe you don't do the contests? Anyway, it is already beautiful how it is! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2011 7:42:00 AM
Your haiku makes me feel grateful that hurricane season is over until June First. You wouldn't believe the flooding we see here and I love the way you described rain falling from "leaden clouds" as they truly look that way. Your poem also reminds me of the photos you showed me of the rainstorm a few months ago in Germany. Also concur with Catie's suggestion below. (Garden sounds similar in all three languages.) Love, Carolyn
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