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Conflicted over Nancy's -BLANK- Verse

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Conflicted over Nancy's -BLANK- Verse

Boy, such a gas
Boy, so much fun
Boy, what a job
Boy, wanna run 

Oh, the pleasure
Oh, the pain
Oh, the freedom
Oh, the strain

Gee, a poem?
Gee, with blanks?
Gee, let's try it
Gee, no thanks!

Got an idee 
Got a glimmer
Got to figure
Got to simmer

Look, it's coming
Look, it's here
Look, I'm rhyming
Look, my dear !

Eek, I'm stymied
Eek, can't think
Eek, come on brain
Eek, on brink

Dang, I'm close now
Dang, I've got it
Dang, the word's come
Dang, in pocket!

Scrabble's a fine game
if with a Q not hobbled
But to tell you the truth,
I'd rather be BOGGLED!

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  1. Date: 8/25/2015 11:45:00 PM
    SUSAN, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:07:00 PM
    rereading this one. It sure was a hoot.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:38:00 AM
    What a HOOT!!!!! Still laughing...

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 5:44:00 AM
    A belated Congratulations on your win in Nancy's "Scrabble" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 10:56:00 PM
    wow, so this is what she wanted. And she chose very WELL, Susan. A big congrats to you, sweet friend!

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 11:21:00 PM
    Congrats Susan~in Nancys contest, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 1:44:00 PM
    Congrats Susan on first place win with this super cool entry luv..

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 1:09:00 PM
    I love this, Susan, had me grinnin' from the 'ginnin'! Thanks for the fun read and for supporting my 'test! Beauty day, namaste~N

    Buchel Avatar Susan Buchel
    Date: 11/13/2011 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow... now I''m even more appreciative of your penchant for the peculiar! Thanks for seeing something fun in my little boggled ditty - the other Sue B.
  1. Date: 11/13/2011 7:42:00 AM
    REading this poem was great fun Susan. Very creative. I have added your name to my list of fav poets.

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 5:25:00 AM
    I can't win at boggle either. But I like the shaking part. Tony

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 11:02:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 9:02:00 PM
    ooops, I did mix you up. Do you realize how close your name is to Susan Burch's?? She is a good friend of mine here and I don't recall commenting to other Susan's other than her lately. But maybe I have commented to you before too??

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 8:47:00 PM
    this is funny,susan. But I"ll have to see what blank verse of Nancy's you are referring to. Does she ask for blank verse to be used in the scrabble contest? Gotta check that out . by the way, here is the meaning of blank verse: It's iambic pentameter without rhyme on the end. that's all it means, but rarely do I see any poets using the name of that form correctly to identify their works! How are you today? I left ya emails. Hope you are getting them. Had a bad night but all is better for now!

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 7:33:00 PM
    Pains of heart break makes u wonder with words. Love ode. Nice pain well pen