Commandment Battlement - Part Four -

Trumpet the ethos of these wading warriors with the hollowed bones 
of their panygeric prophets,resonating triumphant tones,
to forever honor,protect,& perpetuate the valor,virtue,& victory of this Holy Order,
the irridescent echo seeps from their Father's tombs,
for what extent shall I blaze myself and minions in the arrows path,
so to coddle an intangible hope made of a prayer's dope,
or in a mind where a prevailing vision roams,
nay, to avert that macbre nightmare of having my People's progeny becoming the pigmy
of a teething tyrant who condones the perversion of civilization's tomes,
a coalesced consciousness consummated by the last bastion
with a vigorous vigil on this Christmas Eve,
solemn and sacramental the emotion is which this of our hearts 
the Almighty exhumes,

A dispatched soldier ploying as scout,remote, waiting ignorantly to be smote,
a far but not forgotten armored satellite being selfless,
his vanity enemy's threat consumes,
an unbridled but composed offensive of a triplicate terror delivered
by an indefatigable knight ,
an ultimatum presented simply but also strictly,
one at least his assault maroons,

J.A.B. - Part Four -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/1/2016 11:09:00 AM
Well penned. Congrats! :) Sunita
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/1/2016 6:35:00 PM
This poem made me believe in my love for, and command of the English language as a writer Sunita...J.A.B.
Date: 7/26/2013 6:30:00 PM
Such strange comments I've made in the past. I should slap myself hahah. Such a triumphant, sacrificial tone. An epic on the highest of epics. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/27/2013 2:17:00 PM
Epic is beautiful, self assuredness is requisite for attaining subliminty - slapping can be good - thanks for everything you do - J.A.B. %
Date: 8/21/2012 9:22:00 PM
Ah to be compassionate in such chaos is true power in itself. Actually...I don't know what Im saying exactly...or do I....ON TO THE FINALE! :D Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/23/2012 4:59:00 PM
Sounds good to me Laura! its so easy to abandon virtues like hope and love when we are confused and angry; much power of will is requisite to sustain trust in these things my friend - J.A.B.
Date: 8/4/2012 9:17:00 AM
Well, oh well oh well...I wish I'd a fraction of a fraction of your cognisance, Justin! Battles waged aganist a dominion of power? Help me with this one, Justin, please. Best wishes, Mikki
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/5/2012 11:40:00 PM
This is about supplanting avarice with compassion Mikki - honor in sacrafice - J.A.B. thank you -
Date: 7/26/2012 11:57:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Justin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2012 5:41:00 PM
I am overjoyed with the caliber of soul exuding forth from this website Carol!!! There is alot of rich talent here - You People are a blessing to the world! J.A.B.
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