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Come4tunes and comfort me - My frenemy's best birthday wishes

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Come4tunes and comfort me - My frenemy's best birthday wishes

2day once more was fun day, because the sun was there:
Of course! Like all the sundays, as usually they were...
if only you were there 4 me, and not 4 all together!
The sun has gone, and in the mood, it's moon day that begins 

and all around the ticking sounds that I hear all around me,
there's suddenly my Blackberry: a ringtone's sent to me.
As yesterday was 'gain your birthday, told the ringtone sent to me,
As usual, I'm sending you 4 tunes to comfort me;

because I know that once again, as for many a birthday
you surely still are thinking of the things that run the same way:
There is The Sun, there is The Belle and Moon day !s their frenemy's day;

and I am used to sail away for it's too hard to see
that your stubborness clings to him and it won't let us be...
Goodbye, my love; I hope next year you'll come4tunes to comfort me.  

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:39:00 PM
    hey, i see I owe you a very belated congrats on this interesting sonnet form text message!! Nicely done, and on my Scoundrel poem, I just invented that situation. but I did know a guy who was a bit like him in my life!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:23:00 AM
    Texting and sharing music on a phone...delightful poem...though a little sad. Blessings !!

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    Date: 11/18/2012 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Debra!
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:04:00 PM
    Many congrats for your placement!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Like the texting use in your sonnet. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your HM in Cyndi's contest Voahanitriniaina. Love, Carol XXXX