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Cloud Soldiers

A legion of clouds,
March across blue battlefields:
War rumbles ahead.

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  1. Date: 6/3/2010 11:43:00 AM
    Another terrific Haiku, no surprise there. Raul, you see much more through your eyes than many poets I know. And when you do, I can visualize your mind working like a projector in the background. Outcome, incredible short form poetry >> James

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 12:12:00 PM
    this is a definite Oklahoma visual... very nice!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 5:45:00 AM
    As Barbara said,your highness. .those marching clouds impress. .Charma

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 1:08:00 AM
    A bellicose haiku!! : ) "Have" you ever read Tolstoy's War and Peace? He himself considered it as a big poem...I don't know why this haiku reminds me this book. Great work, Raul. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 12:56:00 AM
    Again, your rock. BG