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Champagne Toast

*Drunken Master *


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sweet lavender lips
I heard it through the grapevine
transform from sweet grapes

sweet lavender lips
I heard it through the grapevine
libation of wine

sweet lavender lips
I heard it through the grapevine
intoxicating -----X----- beverage 
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by;pd 
4th place
CHEERS!!!

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:45:00 AM

Very nicely written!

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/27/2014 7:29:00 AM

I'm drinking up your words drop by drop. sweet girl

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/21/2013 7:22:00 PM

Sweet is wine, nicely done written lines, I did enjoy your write above. Thanks for your comments on my recent writes my friend. Sorry i've not been on lately but I got bitten by a spider and was out of it for awhile. Than my son smashed his finger in the door wow it's been a hard week for me. I just wanted you to know that I'm ok.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/12/2013 9:20:00 PM

Hi, my dearest sis! So glad to read your reply & I'm so grateful to hear from you before I finally log out. Have a good night & sweet dream to all of u there. Ok, talk to u again soon. I decided to go down to the pool & have 1hr swimming today. Wish u & your family a very wonderful & blessed wkend again! Biggest hugs to u & everybody & thank u for having the chance to read again this stellar winning piece of urs. God bless! Loveum4evr,Leonora

Robin Davis

Date: 10/7/2013 8:29:00 PM

Linda, there is a hidden sensual meaning in your poem. You bad girl LOL This is creative and fun. nice job hugs

Evrod Samuel

Date: 9/9/2013 8:38:00 PM

ibation of wine..i like that line as no one uses libation anymore and its such a beautiful word..i sometime use the word imbibe when asking my friend if he be drunk today lol....

Len Gasun

Date: 9/6/2013 8:02:00 AM

Good morning there evrdearest sis of mine! Hugs! Hugs! Hugs! Kiss! Kiss! Kiss! :)))) I'm wearing big smiles from the sweet & lovely comments/msgs of yours in my poems. Thank you so much for the hugs! Sending them back to you more & more ;))) & what did you say? red bull? lol I'm really so happy to hear from you. Hope you're always fine & @ zenith of good health. Million thanks again! Just came from your blogs & gave comments. Thanks a lot my dearest sis! More Hugs & kiss! I won’t stay long ‘cuz I need to rest but I’ll come back tom. (class cancelled, yippee! )Tcare & God bless! lovem4ever, Leonora

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/3/2013 12:19:00 AM

This is a little beauty, short and so sweet, great song too, les sings sueellen

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/16/2013 7:42:00 PM

I really like your champagne toast and the intoxicating libation feel. Very Mellow. :)

Kirin Lawrence

Date: 6/12/2013 2:36:00 AM

fun poem

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/5/2013 10:54:00 PM

Very creative! I liked this a lot :)

Phillip Rollings

Date: 6/4/2013 3:07:00 PM

Dear Linda,(the one and only PD) Soup mail to your Soup mail to me. Respectfully Flipper

Phillip Rollings
Date: 6/4/2013 3:13:00 PM

I lost my F in Flipper

Phillip Rollings
Date: 6/4/2013 3:09:00 PM

Linda, how can I make it say Flipper instead of Phillip Rollings? Respectfully lipper

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/3/2013 8:20:00 AM

Hmmmmmm....very sensuous, my dear. Yes...Soup Mail! :)

David Scott

Date: 5/30/2013 10:59:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS MATE WANT TO ENTER SOME COMPOTISIONS MY SELF BUT A BIT LOST AT MOMENT JUST PUT THE SEVEN SINS BACK ON HERE SEPRETLY AND FIVE NEW WRITES SOUP ME LET ME KNOW HOW YOU ARE IF WANT TO COLABERATE SOMERTIME XX DAVIDSCOTT

Holly Moore

Date: 5/29/2013 4:04:00 PM

I love the phrase "Sweet Lavender Lips!" I hope you are doing well. Miss you!...xxoo Holly Moore

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/27/2013 8:43:00 AM

Dear Linda - I love the title It is the poem itself summed up in two words - but not as beautifully horrendous and impactful as what follows. How seductive what passes through sweet lavender lips. Bravo! love, Kathy

Len Gasun

Date: 5/25/2013 10:49:00 PM

Hurray! Let's have another great toast on this & for everything my everdearest sis! Cheers!! I'm not a drinker (not anymore lol) 'cuz my doctors don't allow me anymore lol; but, I'll do it on soup now with you ;))) with this great grape poem of yours, your super win, your other poems I've extremley enjoyed to read this day & everything. Thank you so much for finally stopping by before you go to bed & the nice comments as well. Cheers again! Have a good night rest & God bless! love much always & forever, Leonora

Terry Burns

Date: 5/25/2013 10:09:00 PM

Wonderful poem Linda as they always are. I want to thank you for your recent visit and your wonderful comment. I must tell you on my line about hatred and peace it was a typo. It should have read, let hatred end and peace reign supreme instead of, let hatred and peace reign supreme. Thanks again. Terry

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/25/2013 9:37:00 AM

Your sweet poetry, like wine is intoxicating PD, and with that, i rest my case

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/25/2013 2:33:00 AM

Hi dearest pd ..You got so inspired by bacchus and his grapes..I really wished i could write something about it not to enter contest but to support my maltese friend contest but i just couldn t find my muse..lol:) It seems you have found yours so beautifully..you did it gal

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/24/2013 8:25:00 PM

I'm teetotal, I'll just watch it moisten your lips and lower your resistance lol. Very nice write my Sweet Dark Friend and congrats in the contest. Take care, Richard

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/24/2013 3:15:00 PM

SMILE

Caleah Buil

Date: 5/24/2013 2:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Well deserved! :D Great Haiku!

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/24/2013 1:45:00 PM

Thank you for your visit.I am not trying to ignore anyone just having a tough time figuring things out and trying to find the help I DO need.Take care.I will say a prayer for you and family.Don't worry,be happy.lol.