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Celestial Decor...

With each starry night,I chart the lines and listen,
touching every light,the brighten corset of Heaven,
shapely images...which awes inspired minds,
dazzles of greatness are a rarity too find...

Connecting dots,with each passing constellation,
refining thoughts from a vivid imagination,
as I sit in the middle of two oceans of space
glorious,yet termless,such a beauty too trace...

And as I search further,royal vestments are found,
with galactic choirs,as onlookers bound,
spiraled arms of enchanting sparkles
pinwheeled jewels spinning their particles...

Injecting manifesting space with starlit dust,
hot and cold elements,travel afar in trust,
beginning bonds of a future too cast
not all in the vastness is meant too last...

Inverting my perspective,viewing upon our Earth,
I question the concepts of purposeful worth,
Nation's full of cosmopolitan like galaxies
peopled with stardust...forming life's complexities...

Attitudes of human affairs,nefarious in part,
was it really,the apple,that began it's lawless start?

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  1. Date: 11/6/2010 1:18:00 PM
    Quite a descriptive write of the celestial decor. Such gigantic wonder makes you wonder what started the sorry state of human affairs. The apple? No; there is nothing wrong with apples. It's the ME FIRST attitude that started it all. Great write, Jay, thought provoking. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Peace to you too. Caroline.

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 2:49:00 PM
    Smile ~ Life is a continuum of ever revealing truths which We are given I believe my dear friend &, one truth amid many which I know is that, "I Love You Brother!!!" ~ "Thanks Again" for "Your" precious com &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Priceless Jay Del Fierro;'" Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 2:44:00 PM
    Smile ~ "It Is 'My Loving Father In Heaven'" which whispers so soothingly within my soul "'His' Beautiful Light" that sooo many times has, not only guided my life but especially & also, my hands humbled pen!!! ~ Smile, "You Know 'Dear Jay,'" I can respect & admire a lot of beautiful souls different views & beliefs, as long as, they come from a loving, hopeful & sincere heart....I have a world of love inside of myself although, it may not always seem so, sometimes!? ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 2:37:00 PM
    Smile ~ "No!"....This would be my own answer in regards unto "Your" final stanzas Q?! ~ Really love this wonderful poe "My Dear, 'Precious & Gifted Friend, Jay Del Fierro!!!'" ~ Great images this glorious painting which causes myself to consider a psalm; 104 to be exact amid many others actually ~ Also, my dear friend, "Thank You" for stopping by &, as for "Your Brightness'" com well, I have long now believed "Many Times" that ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 9:34:00 AM
    A pleasure to read your poetry today Jay. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 1:06:00 PM
    What a keen observation of the celestial decor so well penned, Jay

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 12:36:00 PM
    Great expressiveness, descriptiveness, presented here in this one..I can just see the starry night and you connecting the dots..Sara