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Can I sleep with you

Incurable insomnia had perturbed my eyes 
Negligence had destroyed your hopes too 
You were drenched by a heavy shower of sadness. 
Till My bare lustrous skin approached your hours 
Your hands gradually caressing my dynamic curves 
 Long black curls had fallen on your shoulders 
The ecstacy of my passion reached its final hours 
Emotions ran down to my neck 
You were drugged by a blissful kiss 
Isolation was broken with this union . 
Endless nights  spent in your arms 
 Loneliness was ravaged by the kingdom of happiness 
I slept in your deep tranquil eyes . 
Till the moonlight disappeared in the lonely sky . 
This rapturous dream was beautiful and true 
Can I really sleep with you ?

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  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:01:00 PM
    i am touched by this.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Based on the comments it appears your poem caused a stir of emotions. Well done.

  1. Date: 8/10/2011 7:39:00 AM
    Very lovely poem! Thanks for sharing it with us. Regards, Aejaz

  1. Date: 7/22/2011 11:23:00 AM
    this is really great work......i just went dreaming the feel you depicted....thoroughly felt it....

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 8:12:00 PM
    emotionally erotic Smirti with romantic overtones .. great question at the end... dreams come true luv..

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 7:08:00 PM
    drugged by a blissful kiss! Ahh! I relate soo well! hahaha! I simply enjoyed your poem while I had my first sip this morn! More please!

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 4:47:00 PM
    You should know the answer to this last question, although I understand it is rhetorical. The forth line stands out as a lively erotic play on perfection. Love is truly the best drug.

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Very nice....enjoyed.