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Jolo Sulu blasted again
For politicos personal gain
Says nothing to blame
Except they said terrorists team
Which team comes from them?
Though treated as immunity
Still feared the community
This recipe of politics
Much time to take at rest
Many lives lost 
Children’s blood host  
Mothers cry out loud
The severing dead body clouds
Ending of this when
Perhaps if sinners chained
But innocent yet still the victim!

Dedicated to the recent bomb 
victims in Jolo, Sulu. Bombing happened
on Tuesday July 7, 2009.
Written in Sandakan July 10, 2009.

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  1. Date: 8/14/2009 3:46:00 PM
    Victims of war they have no blame for. Well done. congratulations on your win. Joyce

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 2:56:00 PM
    Congratulations, Neldy on your win in Debra's contest. Would that we all have peace in our world and thre would be no more bombing anywhere on our planet. Thank you for bringing your writing to PoetrySoup!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 8:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Neldy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 6:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your HM. TL

  1. Date: 8/13/2009 4:40:00 PM
    Great write, Neldy. Congratulations on your placing in Deborah's Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 10:57:00 AM
    Please enter a verse in my contest "War what is it good for?" and if you would please add your point of view to my blog? Light & Much Love

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 3:04:00 AM
    nice feelings Neldy.It's sad the way life is sometimes. And thanks for your comment on my poem.regards,Prince

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 6:10:00 AM
    Neldy, Your concern for these poor people shines through. Well written and dedicated. Maybe some day man will be able to put violence behind him. God willing. Always, Will