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Bombing!

Jolo Sulu blasted again For politicos personal gain Says nothing to blame Except they said terrorists team Which team comes from them? Though treated as immunity Still feared the community This recipe of politics Much time to take at rest Many lives lost Children’s blood host Mothers cry out loud The severing dead body clouds Ending of this when Perhaps if sinners chained But innocent yet still the victim! Dedicated to the recent bomb victims in Jolo, Sulu. Bombing happened on Tuesday July 7, 2009. Written in Sandakan July 10, 2009.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/14/2009 3:46:00 PM
Victims of war they have no blame for. Well done. congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2009 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations, Neldy on your win in Debra's contest. Would that we all have peace in our world and thre would be no more bombing anywhere on our planet. Thank you for bringing your writing to PoetrySoup!!
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Neldy. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2009 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM. TL
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Date: 8/4/2009 10:57:00 AM
Please enter a verse in my contest "War what is it good for?" and if you would please add your point of view to my blog? Light & Much Love
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Date: 7/21/2009 3:04:00 AM
nice feelings Neldy.It's sad the way life is sometimes. And thanks for your comment on my poem.regards,Prince
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Date: 7/10/2009 6:10:00 AM
Neldy, Your concern for these poor people shines through. Well written and dedicated. Maybe some day man will be able to put violence behind him. God willing. Always, Will
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