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Boken dream

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Boken dream

Broken dream

Empty room with no window
just things made out of stones.
A broken dream reflecting images
from within the soul.
A tree atop of a wide stairs leading
to no place.

White pages left empty no words
to describe the aching heart.

No rainbow no colors grey sky
Waking up is a relief from this
broken dream.

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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Ali, a touching poem - very well written! - (Get out in the sun, be happy!!) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 2:31:00 AM
    Hi, you give so much encouragement that I want to impress you even more dear Leonora, thanks again and again happy Easter to you too! Hugs and love, ali xoxoxo

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 8:22:00 PM
    This is a beautifully sad poem my dear friend Ali. I've enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you so much for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poem dedicated to all mothers. Happy Easter and best wishes always! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Hello Ali, it's been a while since I've seen you on line. Hope you are well? about your poem: The imagery is deep, and sad... I don't like the feel of broken dreams.... every line is well done,,,always~ LINDA