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Blue Winter

on overcast days
damp winter winds sigh and moan
grieving over you

sadseasonssenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:28:00 PM

Tim, BIG congrats for your win. Love the title you gave it to. soupmail.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 5:13:00 AM

Lovely scene created by apt images, Tim. congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:39:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2014 9:52:00 PM

Tim, :) Congratulations, In Andrea's Itty bitty contest.... Goodnight ~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2014 1:39:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in: "Itty Bitty" contest, Tim !! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2014 10:48:00 PM

Tim, I can see below that I had seen this one before but of course could not remember who wrote it. Wanted to tell you that I loved all my HM's. they are beautiful poems but I put them down here for not putting itty bitty in the title line. this would have scored at least a three or four otherwise!! me and my rules, huh?

James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2013 8:00:00 PM

To the gone, but remembered, we shall always pause, grieve. We then move on to where, knowing that they are here. Memorable words to both reader and writer. Have a lovely weekend my Spotify friend :) xx

Anne Rutherford

Date: 3/31/2013 5:17:00 PM

A deep and profound Senryu Tim, makes you a bit sad. Also hopeful for the warm spring to follow .Anne

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/31/2013 8:11:00 AM

what a sweet and beautiful write dear Tim.. love this piece much <3 Happy Easter dearest one <3 much luv and lights

Sherese Gooden

Date: 3/28/2013 7:11:00 AM

This another hauntingly beautiful poem, Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/28/2013 5:35:00 AM

Hi Tim..this give me a feeling of loss and loniliness..Its a very beautiful sad senryu indeed..Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2013 12:04:00 AM

wow, I love this one, tim. If I did not have so much to do tonight, I'd stop and read more of your poetry. I have to go type up some tests for classes tomorrow. UGGG. And already it is after midnight!!