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Blaming it on the moon - contest

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Blaming it on the moon - contest

The moon was shining brightly
Hand in hand we strolled the shore
Holding each other tightly
Gently lowered me to the floor

His hands had no inhibitions
Touching more than was permitted
Sending waves of pleasure
To places I didn't know existed 

Again the moon is shining
As we walk along the shore
Looking down at my bump
Smiles, cos two will soon be four.

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  1. Date: 10/12/2014 5:44:00 PM
    I love the then and now two separate moonlit nights and on this being featured..hugs Tim

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Seren, , this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:30:00 PM
    This is really cute and a little naughty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. A wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Okay.......that last line says a lot !! LOL !!! A fun and romantic stroll that was through your poem!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Interesting winning work..Congrats..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:50:00 PM
    beautiful write...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:29:00 AM
    oh wow well done with this Sss love it a typical Seren xx

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:19:00 PM
    This is a grandiose write my friend! I just love the moon and all its powers that it has on people, at least to me anyway! I really enjoyed reading how two will become four, hey twins! What a glorious piece, such a lovely poem! Great Work!!

    Date: 10/30/2013 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Russell
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:13:00 PM
    Very creative and imaginative write with love and desire, Seren. Soup mail answered

    Date: 10/30/2013 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol thx Ram