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Black Diamond Night

Black Diamond Night (a coal miner’s cemetery) 

Where the ebony, we call “NIGHT”,
Old black rocks sit under the twilight.
Diamond shape eyes unclear and lonely, 
Sinister through hostile spirits only,

I stumble across these stones without a bone.
A solitary confinement alone,
From a barren zone the light transcend.
Only in time, our minds will mend.

Endless valleys and limitless stones.
These bones- these bones they sit alone.
The abyss, of rotten cavities with no fill,
A system no power can unwell the drill
The blood that passed over without a spill.
Peaks collapse into a spellbinding chill.
They are trapped! They are trapped!
Another diamond in the rough. 
Is what they left.

Obsessed with the dead without a death. 
A death that impatiently awaited their last breath.
Gushing, into the gems of dead chemistry,
Diamonds holding its own intensity,
These lonely graves, on top of sycamore hill.
Coal mining hearts that will never heal.
If only shiny eyes could see?
These lonely bones inside of me!
Moving in every direction possible
Flowing in every direction noticeable.
Sockets without eyes.
Stones hiding under the cobalt skies.
The mad sparkles, the madness dies.
Throughout this mess, we held in the blasphemous.
Intervening lots of gems so miraculous.
  
Into a stone of self-religion,
A black night filled of legions.
Acknowledging the soul's capacity of free.
Near the frail bones that sit alone,
Alone they sit in a morbid home.
Through a path unclear and all alone,
Troubled by the visions of my own stone.
Where the night takes place in the dark. 
The ebony rides under the diamond bark.
Along with the coal miners who never got to see the;
“Diamonds of another day!”

:) my own personal favorite poem

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  1. Date: 6/11/2015 10:49:00 AM
    Dark, thought-provoking, elegant -- everything I love in a poem. Great job!

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 1:58:00 AM
    A real gem. And my favorite.

  1. Date: 4/21/2015 1:20:00 PM
    GREAT POEM

  1. Date: 4/12/2015 2:39:00 AM
    Yep! This one definitely belongs on your greatest hits album.

  1. Date: 1/20/2015 6:00:00 PM
    A gem of true genius

  1. Date: 1/20/2015 5:59:00 PM
    A gem of true genius

  1. Date: 1/15/2015 11:22:00 PM
    good poem very expressive

  1. Date: 1/9/2015 11:30:00 PM
    Just in awe. Brilliant work, dark so dark and sad. Trapped, never heal, never got to see, words that cry out. It is a perfect work and the pictures that it creates in my mind will stay with me. Thank you Shane xxx

  1. Date: 12/26/2014 8:54:00 PM
    There aren't enough superlatives to do justice to this poem. It is starkly, darkly beautiful. I stand all amazed.

  1. Date: 11/20/2014 3:20:00 PM
    what a beautiful piece superbly written- is amazing- I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 10/28/2014 12:46:00 PM
    Super...Super...Super...Truly brilliant creation...The Almighty bless you for ever...

  1. Date: 10/1/2014 12:41:00 AM
    I thought I would drop in and read my last comment. Your poem is excellent too.

  1. Date: 9/6/2014 7:38:00 AM
    that is so good, I could hand you a spoon and you would turn it into a story, what an amazing mind you have,

  1. Date: 9/3/2014 11:22:00 PM
    I chose this one because i am collecting favs. I give up you win. I have places to go people to see...

  1. Date: 8/2/2014 12:29:00 AM
    This is a very intense poem about death that is associated with coalmining especially the cave ins. This one hits very close to my heart because my father grew up in Pennsylvania and was from a long line of coal miners. He had many stories of those boyhood days and the deaths that were an all to familiar thing. Cave in, black lung, broken families were all a part of it. He was smart and joined the navy, but, my grandfather died of the black lung. My favorite too, Linda...... Robert.

  1. Date: 6/25/2014 9:25:00 AM
    A MASTERPIECE! My favorite too. Elaine

  1. Date: 6/17/2014 10:28:00 AM
    I can truly see why it's your favorite. It's a beautifully written memorial. Very beautifully written for them. Congratulations on the win and thank you for entering it.

  1. Date: 6/16/2014 5:31:00 AM
    Diamonds out of a coal mine ,, no wonders Linda ! loved ur fav one ,, congrats on top win !

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 8:23:00 PM
    This is truly a "gem" of a poem, Linda! These are very haunting words about the dark times we all go through, and yet we're filled with a hope for something better.... It is cool that everyone was given a first place. Congratulations to you, as well!

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 8:05:00 PM
    Linda, awed! Congrats on your top winner!

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