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Beslan- Russia 2004

Under a free sky — today on a beach in Australia—
I gathered from a white sand beach—ancient, sea-worn shells.

Another world away they gathered up
the siege-worn bodies of their children.

As I rinsed my weathered treasures—
in crystal blue, ocean waves —they were burying their innocents,
lowering them into early graves.

All around me freedom shimmered,
while they—grief stricken—had helpless tears.
Tears that shone on white, shocked cheeks.
I felt the sun warm on my skin—
while they felt the deep chill of evil—mocking them.

I think I know how precious freedom is—
while they are sure of it— as they bury their dreams
with their children.
Children they would have died for.

In the face of such callous cruelty—we feel helpless—
as helpless as they must feel.

Gulls hover above me —like thoughts—
that go out to them on freedom's wings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/28/2015 1:53:00 PM
Suzanne, congrats on your win. SKAT
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Skat: I am late with my reply but no less appreciative. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 11/27/2015 2:03:00 PM
A stunning write, Suzanne! Congrats on your win!, Love, Kim
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:52:00 PM
Kim: I appreciate your comment very much. I have been down with one illness after another but hope to participate more here, Best, SuZ
Date: 11/27/2015 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:53:00 PM
Thanks for your support Richard: It means a lot to me, SuZ
Date: 11/26/2015 3:57:00 AM
Congrats on ur win with this poem Suzanne.. great work!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Dear Dr, Upma: I appreciate all your comments and support. SuZ
Date: 6/8/2013 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations!!! SUZ, nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Linda: I felt very honored by Nate's endorsement of my work.Hugs, SuZ
Date: 6/7/2013 8:35:00 PM
thank you
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2015 7:02:00 PM
My belated Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the poem, SuZ
Date: 4/10/2013 7:37:00 AM
This glaring comparison is what every rich, wasteful, ostentacious person in the world should be thinking about. Great stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 12/30/2015 7:01:00 PM
Belatned Thanks Daver: I appreciate you thoughts. Hope all is well in your world. I am battling health problems but one the mend now. Hugs, SuZ
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