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Living amongst Hell's battles with little to gain aftermath brings stinging rain as beauty dwells in the blood of the stain

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  1. Date: 5/25/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Hey JS.....i gotta love the way your mind works your words....u have a great poetry flavour - Shaz

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Hey Joey, whoa this is almost as weird as mine,,glad you liked it, if it's weird i'm there..David

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 10:14:00 PM
    ME LIKES this one, Joey. It really makes you stop and think on those last few lines! I REALLY appreciate what you said about your support if I ever write a book. Yeah, one day one day. as I keep sayin'. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 5:06:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Yes, some of life can be hell's battles especially those fought in the mind with one wanting to do what is right but it being easier to do what is wrong according the world's standards...Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 3:41:00 PM
    I love how you play with words and form. Great writing. I want to thank you for all you super comments on my writing, thanks for taking a trip back in time. I do not comment much, I just have so little time, I have to make a choice write or comment, I think you understand. Hopefully one day that will change,

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 9:07:00 AM
    take these few words reduce them to their lowest common demonminator and you have an insightful and moving poem..some of you need to learn from this poem and all of mine PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 1:07:00 AM
    Simple wording and easy to read. It delivers good descriptiveness.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 10:56:00 PM
    Great minimalism here, Joey. I haven't been doing ANY minimalism lately. Ooops! Strong last stanza....the beauty of stains is in the eye of the beholder. I saw your last comment regarding TOOL. I am jealous about your back-stage moment. Of course I know Tool. I was spoon-fed Tool lol. I listened to a demo-tape of "Opiate" before the album was eventually recorded live and raw at a concert in NYC. Then when Undertow was released, I was beyond hooked. I have to make sure that I don't directly plagiarize Maynard James Keenan. Thank goodness his writing style is so different, or else I would be screwed. I once wrote a few lines very similar to the lyrics of a track on 10,000 Days....2 years BEFORE the album came out.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 10:27:00 PM
    In my Magic Number poem, it is essentially just the number of kisses that someone would receive during their first date. So simple, I can see how you might want to read into the poem for more complexity but there isn't anything more there, not intentional anyway! I hope you enjoyed the poem though!

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:43:00 PM
    Mr Roboto... a battle on can't fight without a stain... nice rhyme.. one can only have one night and shed all the beauty blood holds... enjoyed,, your true ways,, and view from here... have a nice one..pd

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:27:00 PM
    Wow, now that is a spectacular poem! I thoroughly enjoyed this write you have written tonight Joey! This is the type of descriptions that I like for my poetry, very nicely done with the rhymes! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:17:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry J, love,vie