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BEAR THIS IN MIND for gun-ku contest

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BEAR THIS IN MIND for gun-ku contest

                    BEAR THIS IN MIND

              If you're walking in the wood
              And your dog's not looking good
              With a bear claw in his eye
               or flying through the summer sky.

              Hope you've packed the stuff you need
              Not just sleeping pills or speed
              But some gear that saves your life
              Like a sharpened hunting knife

              Whistles don't impress a bear
              His territory ‘s not to share
              If you want his rapt attention
              Walther's a keen intervention

Copyright © Victoria Anderson-Throop

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:39:00 PM
    hey, I had never seen this one. And how ARE you, Victoria. SEems like I never see you enough. wEll, I loved how you used the play on words with Bear in this poem. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Very nice Victoria!Congrats on the win.

    Anderson-Throop Avatar Victoria Anderson-Throop
    Date: 2/27/2013 2:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks kash..always good to hear from you..your comments are sparing and well thought out....
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your number 1 Victoria luv xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:51:00 PM
    Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Victoria, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Victoria...u gave me such a chuckle outta this couplet entry!! Fantastic usage of gun humor thru your quaint story! I really appreciated this entry! God's blessings to u, gwendolen