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Aye,Aye, and a Mistress

Writers wrong readers with wiles Please protect poetry and prose From flagrant fraudulent fancies Of overwritten odius odes. A related collection of poetry Now can be published at whim. The author just needs lots of money, Hubris,and perhaps a few pencils or pens. Once the selection is published, Layman will fawn at the elequent jewels, Of eight words of lithe, flowery meter, Grouped together by formal,old rules, You and I know better,we can't be fooled. Another anthology appears Boldly boasting ballades Can't construct cinquain Ditto deconconstructing didactic Easy efforts elevate essentially Fabulous flippery, fun, fauxmance. Give gifts ,gaity, glory Hide hyperbole ,hail honesty Ignore idiosincricy Jubilant jeweled jots, Krielle knowledge, Luminates lovers learning. Masters manage monoku No one notices nonsense Only ones own oratory Presents problems personally Quatern quixotically quizes Rhymers,readers, royalaires. Simples statements said softly Translate terse tense truthfully Unless unabridged Villanelles vex vaguries Written without wordiness Yes,you yearn, yearn yonder Zee's zero For Deb's Challenge A A and a Mistress Brenda Atry

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Date: 8/5/2012 12:14:00 PM
I have so much to learn from this derisive masterpiece Brenda - let us all pray that we are not fooled by our own foolishness my friend - let us not become that which we loathe - with somber respect, J.A.B. %
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:29:00 AM
any new poem, brenda?? would love to read you again! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:20:00 AM
Congrad's hon thanks for taking the time out to enter! SOUP MAIL Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:35:00 AM
brenda, congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:27:00 AM
Great writing, Brenda. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Elaine
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations Brenda on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:09:00 PM
Congrats Brenda on your super success and win in this contest with a fantastic creation luv.. enjoy top billing...
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:39:00 PM
Stunning and powerful entry to the theme of the contest, brenda, enjoyed the flow of expressions
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:55:00 AM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Brenda. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:26:00 PM
Well, Im exhausted just reading it! well done my dear...BG
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