Attributes

Attributes, many I adore 

Innocent like a Child
    Honest like a Spiritual Master
       Fighting Spirit like a Soldier
           Motivator like a Leader 
              Intelligent like a Einstein  
              Diligent like a Bee
           Humorous like Circus Joker
       Passionate like Picasso 
    Ambitious like Alexander the Great
Mass appeal like Mahatma Gandhi

Attributes, all in one are rare
 
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By Hitendra Mehta
May 2011

For Members contest - Top Ten by Adeleke Adeite

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 1:20 AM
Quite the philosophical piece! 'adore' and 'rare' is a neat off-rhyme to begin and conclude. Most inspirational! Best wishes, Keith
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July 30, 2011 at 1:18 AM
Quite the philosophical piece! 'adore' and 'rare' is a neat off-rhyme to begin and conclude. Most inspirational! Best wishes, Keith
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Hitendra. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:49 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of adeleke, Hitendra
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your fantastic win in the top ten contest with this wonderful write ..great title my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Adeite Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:38 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 5th place. Luv, Ade
Devonshire Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 1:26 PM
This really is an awesome entry, Hitendra. I hope you'll let me know when you post new work. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carolyn
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May 31, 2011 at 4:21 AM
An excellent write for the contest, nicely done! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments. Alexa
Mossburg Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:31 AM
Very clever way to create a poem for this contest. Best wishes for the contest. I enjoyed the read. Steve
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 9:38 PM
wow, GOOD WAY to do this contest. I hope you do very well with this one, Hitendra.
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 10:12 AM
What a wonderfully creative list of your top 10 attributes, Hitendra. Please always think of me as the circus joker. Thank you for your kind comments. Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. I'm sending winning wishes your way for Adeleke's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:54 PM
A perfect "10" Hitendra for this elegant piece for the contest.. good luck my friend.. all wonderful qualities to exude in life.. precious wprds luv..
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May 24, 2011 at 11:06 AM
all the best brother! I am sure this poem will be liked by every one ! Take care....
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