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'At Peace'

~ Shall I throw roses on your grave Or quiet flowers that I saved Or perhaps a simple meadows growth Of sleepy, tangled Angel's Breath The soft snow will be your blanket You died driving like a rocket The crash was really your fault That is the reality of my world ~ Faded now are the flowers on my grave Amongst the trees, I whisper I rest in eternal sleep, dear heart I am sublime in Heaven forever My one regret, is my death too soon It was my fault, to die this way It was my fault, can you forgive The rain that falls my tears of love I wait beneath the pure white snow ~ Verse December 4, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:32:00 AM
    pain of loss runs deep, liked your poem dearly,...lovely write .Thank you for commenting on my poems . Love Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:42:00 AM
    so moving - heartfelt and lovely write, Constance x

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:39:00 PM
    absolutely astounding poetry my dear friend .. heartfelt lines reach out to me as we connect once again in sorrow .. Heaven forever is beautiful .. we shall all be together then .. no more tears .. luv this immensely ..

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:54:00 PM
    Perfect page layout for a touching write and I hope you have..I bet you have! powerful! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:05:00 PM
    wow, I love how you organized this one, first you talking and then your dearly departed. I think this is your true love, Constance? I had not realized he died racing. your sensitive nature and creativity have produced a wonderful sad poem.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:46:00 PM
    I feel your pain of the loss..That must be the hardest death to bare_the loss of one's mate..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:56:00 AM
    This is such a sad write my friend, you sound like you need a friend to talk to! Whoever that friend might be, reach out to him or her! I am such a friend if need be! This is a brilliant poem! Great Work my friend!!