She Weeps

She weeps- Shall I throw roses on your tomb, or flowers that I saved; or perhaps a simple meadows growth, of sleep tangled angel's breath. The soft snow will be your blanket, your death was really your fault; that is the reality you left me darling. He whispers- Faded now are the flowers at my tomb, among the trees my spirit drifts; I wait in this eternal sleep, my regret is not being stronger. Yes, it was my fault, it was my fault, that is the truth; the raindrops that fall, are my tears of sadness. ________________________ December 4, 2012 Poetry/Verse/She Weeps Copyright Protected, ID 12-440-443-04 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Date: 12/9/2012 9:32:00 AM
pain of loss runs deep, liked your poem dearly,...lovely write .Thank you for commenting on my poems . Love Mehnaz
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:42:00 AM
so moving - heartfelt and lovely write, Constance x
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Date: 12/6/2012 6:39:00 PM
absolutely astounding poetry my dear friend .. heartfelt lines reach out to me as we connect once again in sorrow .. Heaven forever is beautiful .. we shall all be together then .. no more tears .. luv this immensely ..
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Date: 12/5/2012 3:54:00 PM
Perfect page layout for a touching write and I hope you have..I bet you have! powerful! Light & Love
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Date: 12/4/2012 3:05:00 PM
wow, I love how you organized this one, first you talking and then your dearly departed. I think this is your true love, Constance? I had not realized he died racing. your sensitive nature and creativity have produced a wonderful sad poem.
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Date: 12/4/2012 2:46:00 PM
I feel your pain of the loss..That must be the hardest death to bare_the loss of one's mate..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2012 10:56:00 AM
This is such a sad write my friend, you sound like you need a friend to talk to! Whoever that friend might be, reach out to him or her! I am such a friend if need be! This is a brilliant poem! Great Work my friend!!
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