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Warmth is the way you make me feel it's the way you look up with your head still down it's the way you laugh with your eyes it's the way I don't want to look away it's the way you make me forget anything else going on it's the way you make me forget everyone else it's the way you make my walls melt and my heart sleepy it's the way you make me want to say so ...(written years ago) warmth is the way I remember these things for ever so swiftly ends our fling were you ever even here think once of me my dear it does not mean much anymore never at all to you before it used to mean something to me but now I am numb and empty still I sigh and reminisce on my past feelings I might just miss and with a smile, ever so faint I kissed your lips, although it raint ...(and now completed) warmth is when you look at me that way you have it's what you alone can make me feel it's the way I'm still warm even when Baby It's Cold Outside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/17/2010 8:40:00 PM
I love this one, Efren. I know you go by Jay now, but it'll take me a little while to get used to it. I'm one of six editors helping to put out a magazine of poetry, stories, art, called U Magazine. Look it up on Facebook or in a search engine. Also look up Mind's Eye. I'd love to see you there. :-) Aunt Mari
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:40:00 PM
this beautiful piece sings with such flowing lines, and the theme of love/ romance does its thing... much enjoyed warmest, nette
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