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As I Lay There

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As I Lay There

As i lay there thinking why hasnt is there so much evil in the world
If there a god why hasnt he came back what if he isnt coming back
What if there no god and we have to suffer from this place called earth 
As i lay there thinking

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  1. Date: 4/8/2011 4:58:00 PM
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  1. Date: 4/1/2011 1:08:00 PM
    Nice expressions of thoughts on the world full of evils, Gage