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As I Lay Dying, I asked - - -

Who will decide my fate? What is to become of my existence? When will I enter the gate? Where are you Lord, I need your assistance? Why am I wandering and full of earthly resistance? Written for the contest 5 W's Sponsored by Harry Horseman

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:34:00 AM
    constance, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Dear Heart. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Constance. Hugs

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:03:00 PM
    Wow, intriguing write, Constance! A belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:08:00 PM
    this is marvelous. One of the best the way you chose to do it! Congratulations, Constance.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 4:00:00 AM
    Hi Constance - Congratulations on your win! Well done. Your sensitive soul comes through loud and clear. - Gail

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Your heart and soul wrote this from the most beautiful perspective and I appreciate its depth very much!! Congrats, Constance! Cheers to u! gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Congratulations! Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:08:00 AM
    So lovely, and so you !!! So nice to see you here in the winner's circle!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:04:00 AM
    I love it! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:54:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:43:00 AM
    Some very powerful questions. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:36:00 AM
    I dare say many persons have lived your words Constance. Fine poetry as per normal from you. Many congratulations on your win in Harry's contest. Have a lovely Monday :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on a fine win Constance xx

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 6:42:00 AM
    Love the connection between you and your creator, congrats Constance on your win, love vie

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 AM
    congrats on your win.. have a great day cory

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this gem. I like. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on a winning poem. Full of faith.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:40:00 AM
    Constance another absolute gem i had the honour of reading for my contest. congrats to you, and thanks for entering. hope you are feeling well.