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Upon the pier of restless shore
she scans across the endless swell,
to end pain’s woe just like before...
her necklace breaks, in chilled farewell.

On edge of evening,clockwork races
with hope to drown in circling waves. 
No more a chance to hold stars’ graces,
a wish tangled in child’s tomb, engraved.

Big dipper heeds her whimper, faint
as dazzling light soaks in deep sea. 
Her infant harks ,” Mom, be restrained;
I'm here with you, through love’s glory.”

By questioning the bleak of days
her truth alights, as heart obeys.

Surviving after Suicide Attempts Contest
Sponsor: Anne Currin
by nette onclaud 

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Congrats on your win my friend. Sorry for wishing lately. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Oh I'm crying.....congratulations well deserved top spot nette....sniff sniff

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:22:00 PM
    nette, another lovely win... PD

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 8:39:00 AM
    You will join the Bard's Band- at this rate.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Stunning! This is a winner.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 12:41:00 AM
    This is an excellent sonnet very well-crafted by your amazing & lofty creative words as always my very dear friend Nette! Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you good luck and best wishes always! Have a blessed Sunday there! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Oh my goodness, this is BY FAR one of the best sonnets I have read on the Soup! To say the least you outstandingly amazing poet, this is going straight into my list of favorites!!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 3:11:00 PM
    wonderful sonnet, my friend

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Your lines embrace all of life itself. All of the elements. In this case, family...damn. Great job!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Your words hold such beauty and meaning, the way how you compose & express, is truly touching!!! Thankyou for sharing....nette,,, blessings cherie...<3

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:56:00 AM
    This write is so beautiful I can't describe how gorgeous this poem truly is my friend! The heart surely obeys Nette!, within your poem it follows the "dazzling light, " and "circling waves!" I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this morning! What a glorious poem, a masterpiece you have formed! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:34:00 AM
    Lovely Sonnet ...missed you... xxx Michael

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:08:00 AM
    Oh Netter, in heaven there's bits of you spread all over the place, that's how God made the stars, Love You Girl xxx Fav xxx