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Below is the poem entitled Art. which was written by poet Rachel W. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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If I drew us together,
you couldn't tell we've been apart.
You could never tell you were the one,
who broke my heart.

Copyright © Rachel W

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  1. Date: 5/5/2010 5:08:00 AM
    so sad, we all hurt and are hurt by our loved ones in life...

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 2:24:00 PM
    I totally agree. So short but so meaningful. Nice write. :)

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 8:37:00 PM
    So simple and yet so much feeling and dream flowing from the words. I really like this. ~KC