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Another Love-2

Another Love

You hold me in thrall
Charm me with your demeanor
And draw me to you
Like a kindergarten kid 
Is, by a wayside puddle.

For: Chris Aichtner's 'Enter the Tanka' contest

Copyright © S.Jagathsimhan Nair | Year Posted 2012

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/20/2012 6:02:00 AM Congratulations on your win Jag this is superb just love that last line xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/19/2012 8:44:00 PM Jag :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/19/2012 4:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Jag. This was a sweet analogy Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 10/17/2012 10:43:00 PM Never the less quite natural & deft articulation Jag - the puddle metaphor is brilliant - J.A.B. % Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/17/2012 2:21:00 PM very sweet, Jag. YOu are my last Look-see for the afternoon. thanks for your comment and I hope to see you soon! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/17/2012 12:03:00 PM Totally fun imaginative write! Who in the world demands such things as a poem--u have to be in the mood to write..it cannot be forced out like water! Anyways, this is stupendous...gwendolen Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 10/16/2012 11:24:00 AM Enjoyed your Tanka tonight Jag! ;) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2012 2:43:00 AM Lovely small poem jag - well written tanka. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/16/2012 2:09:00 AM Lovely tanka here Jag!Enjoyed. Login to Reply