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Old Soul

Black, storm cloud eyes sear, roil smog-aged burnt skin- Soul is old...torn All by the age of six. for David's twenty/twenty contest :) 02272012

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/13/2012 10:52:00 AM

wow, you were a very talented six year old, nikko. i missed this contest, but hope it was a winner

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 8:18:00 PM

Hi, again, Nikko. How are you doing today? My sister just called me and talked for an hour, so I better not spend much time here tonight. Too much to do!! Luv, Andrea

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 10:16:00 AM

Congrats on your amazing win, Nikko. It is so sad when children have to grow up way before their time. Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/3/2012 11:28:00 AM

I am tickling our belly TOO!! ha ha ha. I am laughing so hard knowing that YOU OWN AN ELMO T-shirt! Now I gotta get one too!! Glad you liked it! Love, Gwendolen

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/3/2012 7:39:00 AM

Congrats, Nikko. Outstanding, well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2012 11:34:00 PM

big congratulations to you, Nikko. WEll deserved win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 7:52:00 PM

NIKKO... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 6:16:00 PM

Hi..Nikko.... you never join my contest... hummmm..well anyways...good luck in the contest... are you afraid your gonna win...lol.. had to throw that in there... However I do miss you entering my contest...maybe next time~ ;-)* PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2012 5:41:00 PM

Great topic chosen..Congrats..Sara

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 4:08:00 PM

Nikko, wonderful use of imagery. I really liked this work. Congrats on winning David's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/2/2012 10:58:00 AM

amazing yet too often true! Congrad's Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 9:51:00 AM

whoooa, nikks... ang lalim nito.. love the whole scene, sad but beautiful!... congrats and huggs!.. how is mother??

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2012 9:20:00 AM

high impact poetry Nikko sweet friend .. congrats on a deeply stirring entry and a winning wonder luv.. how is all?

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2012 6:27:00 AM

Congrats Nikko.Loved it first time around.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/2/2012 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations nikko xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2012 8:48:00 PM

I should have come here my first time after Chris had commented. hahaha. Thanks for your explanation, Nikko. I hope I remembered to answer your last email. I read your mail and I think I replied. HOpe you are enjoying your week! Luv, Andrea soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2012 9:18:00 PM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY AGAIN!!!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/28/2012 3:22:00 PM

HAPPY THE DAY AFTER BIRHTDAY!!!!! So sorry I missed your day, we were away for the weekend.... love and BIG BIRTHDAY HUGS AND A KISS FOR YOU!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/28/2012 3:21:00 PM

Awwww...Looook! It's the Palmario TWINs on their birthday!! Glad to feel connected to you guys on our very very special day...I have been on the move all day with incredible busy-ness! I hope you guys had a wonderful time together and that the weather was great! Love, Gwendolen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2012 10:08:00 AM

Ow geeeeeeeee all by the age of six ..Great post Nikko... Where is pen lee?:) by the way,lovely profile pic dear :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/26/2012 8:46:00 PM

age of six. horribly true.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2012 4:07:00 PM

wow, NOW you have a really cute avatar up. It's not your twin, is it? heehee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2012 4:06:00 PM

this one is deep, Nikko. You have to spell it out for me. I really want to understand it. the last line is so cool and I know you are saying something very significant!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2012 1:45:00 PM

Many good wishes for the contest Nikko,nicely done poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise