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A String of Cliches

The stillness of the sound It’s feeding like a drip Oh life’s a funny old thing. Planes drone overhead Seas lap dirty shores It’s just a string of clichés. My hands are bored My heart’s overgrown It doesn’t know where to go. I’ve got a fissure inside It gets deeper every time Whenever I try to move. Upwards and outwards I’m scrambling upwards And outwards… Now… And the crack is growing It’s growing in To me Oh how do you stop What’s already started? How to stop a freight train?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Nicola. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nicola. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2011 3:50:00 PM
Nicola, to answer your question...you write it down. an enjoyable fissure to fall into! ;-)
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:20:00 PM
enjoyed this piece with a touch of intrigue.
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Date: 6/19/2011 4:16:00 PM
Very lovely!
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:48:00 PM
Congrats Nicola on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all luv..
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Date: 3/14/2011 2:22:00 PM
I like your work. Remember, cliche sells everything and always has and always will. That is because people love cliche and the familiar. I use cliche a lot because I know that. I have a true story about a runaway derailing freight train coming to a hault within inches of my nose, everybody in the depot ran out the back door. I just watched the train derail and almost destroy the depot along with myself inside it. True story. Everyone said I had nerves of steel. LOL Vee Bdosa
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