A Soul Awakened

He lay there, unable to move 
a vibrant young man, his mistake
going too fast on a wet greasy road
slipped slithered and crashed into a wall
His life was rugby, football all sports 
forever keeping fit, had new girl
will she stay around, doesn’t want pity just love, 
love of each others hearts

He has lain there for 6 months now
feels the inevitable twitch now and again
just muscles flexing themselves, 
giving hope to the person without any, until that day
His surgeon came to him, “
There is a breakthrough, always an element of risk”
Without a second to think he answers
I am ready to take that chance

Epidural spinal cord stimulation and repeated motion training.
After a short time he can now stand for a few minutes
and move his toes.
His soul is awakened belief in prayer answered he smiles again
Hard work and hope will bring him through
The light at the end of the tunnel is now near.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/1/2013 6:12:00 PM
Seren, congratulations in Gail's "A Soul Awakened" contest.. take care~ LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2013 1:16:00 PM
Seren congratulations on your heartfelt poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 4/28/2013 12:56:00 PM
congratulations on your number one spot Seren xx
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Date: 4/28/2013 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your grand win~A.O
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:27:00 AM
What a journey such pain and such joy! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations seren..a great hope filled write...
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Date: 4/27/2013 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in this contest Seren, sad story with happy ending, very nicely written. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/15/2013 2:33:00 AM
very strong stuff Seren, and very well presented . xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/15/2013 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Mandy...Seren
Date: 4/14/2013 7:48:00 PM
Wow.......what a powerful story, and thankfully a hopeful message for anyone who may be going through something similar. This is a story worth telling........beautifully written!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/14/2013 10:55:00 PM
Thank you Carrie.....Seren
Date: 4/14/2013 9:21:00 AM
Wonderful Seren ..good luck...Donna
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/14/2013 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Donna....Seren
Date: 4/14/2013 8:00:00 AM
Seren, yes, powerful! Jimbo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/14/2013 9:26:00 AM
thanks Jimbo for commenting and stopping...Seren
Date: 4/14/2013 6:29:00 AM
This is a powerful write you have written here my friend! I am impressed with this incredible poem Seren! You have delighted me with the splendor of this lovely piece! What an astounding poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/14/2013 9:26:00 AM
Thx Russell ...Seren
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