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09/11/2020 Lonely souls left to worry, the furtive enemy lurks, rest plenty, less hurry, from home, everyone works The count went one, two, looking for who to point to, then it went three, four, stopped moving out the door The count went five, six, knew t’was no easy fix, when it went seven, eight, then you truly felt the weight Grief stretched week to week, weeks turned to months long, to end this quick, each of us seek, hope we not be proven wrong A Lipogram poetry contest Sponsor: Emily Pinet

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Date: 7/8/2011 8:40:00 AM
Thanks everyone, for your valuable comments!
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:44:00 PM
Beautiful, Sharon. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:53:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest, Sharon
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sharon in Barbara's "A River Runs Through It contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 1:46:00 AM
I like this one very much...should have been placed higher in my opinion...well written ...congratulations...Syd
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:39:00 AM
I really enjoyed the way each stanza was a different theme. Vindicated, intoxicated, celebrated. Great parallelism. Congrats.
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:14:00 PM
congrats on your 3rd place win in the contest Sharon with this powerful piece
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:26:00 PM
Congrats Sharon on your big win in the contest luv with this exciting entry on the river..theme.. enjoy on this happy 4th..luv..
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:58:00 PM
Sharon..this one was unique and I truly enjoyed it. Congrats on your placement in my contest. BG
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:13:00 AM
Excellent writing Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 11:49:00 AM
a well worded and very creative piece of poetry.
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Sharon Well
Date: 6/28/2011 6:17:00 AM
thank you, James!

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