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A Med-It-Ation

My writing requires an edit After each line I regret it It can't get much worse Load this verse in a hearse As readers try to forget it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/4/2018 6:46:00 PM
oh gosh I simply can't find one to comment on!! Now I'm on fifth best one (according to Soup ) and I see I was first to comment to this one back in 2013!! I think it's funny how they have our poems ordered by "best" based on faves we probably get (or most comments or something) anyway, this truly is one of your best!!
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/4/2018 7:39:00 PM
Andrea, perhaps I will start writing more. It depends on what experiences and inspirations come my way. Thanks.
Date: 7/8/2013 7:26:00 PM
Lovee it. Good for an editor to read. :DDD (***love) found a mistake jk HAVE A grand day, Mr. Duke. Could relate to this lots. I need edits on many poems. Thanks for the lil reminder. hehe. -DWBsauce
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Date: 7/7/2013 4:56:00 AM
My writings requires a few edits too, especially the ones I post that I don't like ;} thank you for reading Autumns Birth. that one I like, it's simply like me ;} I'm honest , it's politicians who are not. I will take your word on that ;}
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Date: 7/4/2013 2:38:00 PM
Very nice Duke! Clever one yet again. :) Always, Laura
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Date: 6/10/2013 8:00:00 PM
I love the theme! It made me smile while reading it. Excellent. ^___^
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Date: 6/8/2013 4:34:00 PM
lol, such a true thing like when your writing and keep going back editing and rewriting everything till it seems write, enjoyed your write , ~always, Linda
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:38:00 AM
I agree with Kim's comment,cleverly penned.I enjoyed perusing your poem Duke.
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:31:00 AM
Very cleverly written, but not true of your talent-- enjoyed this.
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Date: 6/7/2013 7:07:00 AM
- Your words is written in black on white ..... - well done, Duke! - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:29:00 PM
a funny self-depricating one, Duke.
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