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A Lump of Clay

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A Lump of Clay

                                                   in the potter's hands
                                           a lump of clay is transformed...
                                                    an object of worth

For Black Eyed Susan's 
Single Senryu contest

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:45:00 PM
    Kim, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Reminds me of Gene McDaniels singing A Hundred Pounds Of Clay. Nice poem.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:26:00 PM
    I once took a pottery class, and my lump of clay.....well..........not sure it was worthy to anyone but myself by the time I was done....but the experience and pleasure I had was worth a million dollars!! :) Nicely done, Kim!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 3:40:00 PM
    good one, kim! just like a few words can be transformed into a poem!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:22:00 AM
    I like that one, feels like it has proper secondary meanings, the potter as a mentor, the clay is a pupil, very nice.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:02:00 AM
    A very clever write,Kim.It says so much in few words.Best wishes over at Susan`s:-) Love,Arild

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 11:01:00 PM
    This is all true Kim. In the Potter's hand we become a piece, of great value. Best wishes and one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:05:00 PM
    to breathe some life into clay is nice, when the eye percieves a treasure..

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 8:33:00 PM
    This is a truly amazing Senryu Kim! I really enjoyed the creativity you exuded within this incredible poem, a fine example of a clever write! The clay assumes the form the potter desires, from which it gains its worth, a beautiful sentiment! I just love this piece, Great Work!!