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A gentle glance

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A gentle glance

Stillness encircles crystal eyes
Just an admirable gaze
Feel the warmth flowing from my heart
And you sit watching treasuring each lasting smile
May we want from each other?
Rejoice for now our tepid lips met at last
The cloak of love transformed
All from a the mere perception of our being
Into the arms of a closeness created from a divine being 
And now bodies entangled in a restless flame 
A passion of sharing, touching, healing so personal 
So advanced in the journey of our relationship 
With depth and overflowing adornment
Osculating every pore of each other into the eternity of us
Now we pose into a state of blissfulness 
Released in the arms of light  
Quietly enraptured 

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  1. Date: 12/22/2009 6:47:00 PM
    This poem reminds me of fruit cake, rich and delicious!

  1. Date: 12/22/2009 8:41:00 AM
    Well Laura I am in tears reading this lovely romantic poetry from u today.. such a beautiful expression of love... what an experience if true.. what an experience to look forward to .. if not... thankxxx for sharing this masterpiece and for your kind comments on my poetry today.. your input on my writings is very menaingful to me.. also the blog comments too... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 10:48:00 PM
    Beautiful Laura! A wonderful expression of your love! Thank you for sharing and thank you for your congrats on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 4:41:00 PM
    A lovely, passionate poem, Laura :-)

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 8:01:00 AM
    Such deep passion and feeling in this poem, Laura. Happy Holidays to you at this wonderful time of year! ~ Love, Carrie