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A Feather in the Breeze - a shadorma

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A Feather in the Breeze - a shadorma

                                                      A feather
                                            floating in  the breeze,
                                                    so care free,
                                            Will I ever be that free?
                                                    Will I ever fly?

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  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your 1st place win Kim, great poem says much in so little space, luv vie

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 7:04:00 AM
    Kim, congrats on your win! I love this form! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 5:07:00 AM
    congrats on your win Kim

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:01:00 PM
    Hi KIm, congratulations in Brian's contest...good night..pd

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 8:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 6:17:00 PM
    I think you DO fly Kim..such a big heart! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 5:58:00 PM
    Excellent piece,Kim.Short but full of great meanings.Nice job.Congrats on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:32:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on honor of placing in Brian contest..Sara

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 2:21:00 PM
    congrats Kim on a fantastic first place poem and win luv.. also for your swet comments too.. am slowly recovering and hubby filling in for me now..

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:30:00 AM
    Simple yet so profound...a question I have often asked.. Congratulations to you, Kim

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:18:00 AM
    Good one! congrats, this is thought provoking and yet light-hearted. BG

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 6:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#188" contest Kim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 4:16:00 AM
    KIm congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 11:46:00 AM
    This is truly a fabulous and fantastic write Kim! I really enjoyed the wondrous verse you have created! This is just my type of poem here! It makes you think! Awesome poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 12:57:00 AM
    I'm going to have tolook up shardorma. Sounds like an Indian word. But I love the poem, especially the first three lines.

  1. Date: 7/6/2012 11:35:00 PM
    this is wonderful. Both in thought and presentation, Kim.