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A Feather In the Breeze

A feather floating in the breeze, so care free, unafraid. Will I ever be that free? Will I ever fly? 7/6/2012 Entered in Line Gauthier's Bite Size #32 contest Shadorma: 3/5/3/3/7/5

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/13/2012 7:04:00 AM

Kim, congrats on your win! I love this form! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May

Date: 7/13/2012 5:07:00 AM

congrats on your win Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2012 10:01:00 PM

Hi KIm, congratulations in Brian's contest...good night..pd

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/12/2012 8:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/12/2012 6:17:00 PM

I think you DO fly Kim..such a big heart! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/12/2012 5:58:00 PM

Excellent piece,Kim.Short but full of great meanings.Nice job.Congrats on your well deserved win....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 2:32:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on honor of placing in Brian contest..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2012 2:21:00 PM

congrats Kim on a fantastic first place poem and win luv.. also for your swet comments too.. am slowly recovering and hubby filling in for me now..

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/12/2012 7:30:00 AM

Simple yet so profound...a question I have often asked.. Congratulations to you, Kim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/12/2012 7:18:00 AM

Good one! congrats, this is thought provoking and yet light-hearted. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2012 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#188" contest Kim. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/12/2012 4:16:00 AM

KIm congrats on your win...David

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/7/2012 11:46:00 AM

This is truly a fabulous and fantastic write Kim! I really enjoyed the wondrous verse you have created! This is just my type of poem here! It makes you think! Awesome poem, Great Work!!

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/7/2012 12:57:00 AM

I'm going to have tolook up shardorma. Sounds like an Indian word. But I love the poem, especially the first three lines.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2012 11:35:00 PM

this is wonderful. Both in thought and presentation, Kim.