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Within Forest Twilight

The forest is in beauty Twilight on the still water Upon the flowing river Fifty swans just drift Then a whirling sudden sound A clamour of wings beating Above my head a soaring Gone tranquility But soon they calm and return To paddle the blue water Drifting within still twilight Fifty swans just float Dodoitsu December 9, 2012 By Constance For the contest Nature Dodoitsu, Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:09:00 PM
    A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:14:00 PM
    It's good seeing this one again and at first place, Constance. I hope the new year is treating you well? It's really cold and snowy here this weekend. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:59:00 PM
    CONSTANCE, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Wonderful Constance, congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:10:00 AM
    Love your fifty swans..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:37:00 PM
    Just amazing Constance!!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:37:00 PM
    Beautiful win.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:17:00 PM
    Well done Constance .....Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:40:00 PM
    Lovely dodoitsu. congratulations Constance. Nice to find you entering again. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Wonderful and awesome write,Constance...Congrats on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:56:00 PM
    Great idea to create calm with the swans on the water so cool. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fantastic win! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Beautiful picture. Congratulations and thanks for sharing,,, mehnaz

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:06:00 PM
    Congratulations Constance on your winning top spot xx

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:37:00 AM
    Love the titillating motion of the enchanting swans. A nice balance of flux and tranquility on an enchanting river. Enjoyed your beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:47:00 AM
    very nice Constance ,,,, have a Merry Christmas ;}

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:35:00 PM
    beautiful descriptions here, Constance

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Hi Constance brilliant picture conjured on paper by your wonderful pen, good luck in the contest although I think this is a sure fire winner, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:06:00 AM
    Ah, Constance...I see you still have that magic way with refreshing and calming...would LOVE to hear from you again if you feel so inclined...Tim