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Thru Ab-Straction To Absolution

Take "me" away,,
from truths..) un-form me"
unseen to halogise with...
May my aptness be swirled
and re-involved prescience
emerge now as resolutions to
eternal resolve..Are become..!


copyright Joe Maverick 2012
in support of Brian Strands abstract me competition

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Michelle Mac Donald Date: 6/6/2012 8:13:00 PM Feels as though this had been penned during profound thought spaces, Joe! "un-form me"...until "become". "eternal resolve" gives this a decisive note. Best wishes, Love, Mikki Login to Reply Joe Maverick Date: 4/11/2023 10:57:00 PM Thank you for commenting.'

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 5/14/2012 8:52:00 PM My mind becomes abstract reading this; I needed a good tweak tonight to get my mind in gear. All the best in the contest! Luv, Lizzie Login to Reply Joe Maverick Date: 4/11/2023 10:57:00 PM Thank you for commenting.'

Don Johnson Date: 3/12/2012 4:58:00 AM abstract it is ...for brian tis... keep at it cobber mate.... Login to Reply Joe Maverick Date: 4/11/2023 10:58:00 PM Thanks old mate Your comments great.'

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/5/2012 9:57:00 AM Thanks for your support....I am ok just had a bad day and blew some steam!! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/2/2012 1:55:00 PM very clever piece, my friend Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/27/2012 12:00:00 PM I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Joe. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/22/2012 8:55:00 AM so this is what it's all about, (abstract) that is. thanks Joe, i'm learning every day. harry Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 1/21/2012 3:20:00 PM Well done Joe should abstract Brian, without a contradiction, thanks mate for comments.... Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 1/20/2012 7:53:00 PM WoW! You never fail to make me think. I love your way with words. Good Stuff my friend. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 1/20/2012 8:39:00 AM enjoyed....may need the dictionary to fully understand. our preacher gave out some words that I didn't know and I told my hubby that he was just showing out....or making stuff up. though I did find the word in the dictionary. hehe!! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/17/2012 5:50:00 AM almost blank verse Joe..unrhymed verse with meter ..Take me away/from the truths unform me/ unseen to the halogise with/May my aptness be swirled and reformed re involved a prescience/to emerge now/as a resolution eternal/ to resolve/ to become..very cool bean concept and excellent mental jaunt..Light & Love Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/12/2012 5:24:00 PM Enjoyed reading your great work..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 1/10/2012 4:45:00 PM WoW! This one is really deep. A fine entry. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/10/2012 11:08:00 AM Hey there Joe, you sure brought abstract to the table with this one ;) I enjoyed it.. Thank you for dropping in on my side of the world and for the smiles you bring ;) tc Wilma Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/9/2012 10:56:00 PM Dear Joe, you are wonderful... Taking it all back... Thanks for the becoming thoughts... Take care..pd Login to Reply

Kimberly Larocca Date: 1/9/2012 8:25:00 PM Thanks for the visit. This was a very interesting write. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 1/9/2012 6:28:00 PM you are like picasso joe, not easily understood but one just knew there's a greatness in you. good luck on the contest Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/8/2012 11:44:00 AM Hey, joe am having to use joe's ;puter (MY joe. haha) just wanted to say hi. Gotta get off his laptop now and get to church. BYE, andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/7/2012 6:16:00 PM pure pristine work of art Joe.. good luck in contest my friend... thankxx for uplifting words and comments and well wishes to me.. much appreciated.. glad to be back ..slow but sure.. learning to type all over again luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/3/2012 9:58:00 PM thanks for your kidding comments today, Joe.You are the greatest! Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 1/3/2012 7:24:00 AM This is great Joe. I only hope I can do well with my own resolutions. I'm just gonna try to learn to keep my mouth shut and breathe through my nose. ;) God Bless and Happy New Year, JB :) Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 1/2/2012 8:47:00 PM me too. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/2/2012 8:34:00 PM YUP, that's abstract all right!!! Gosh, I don't have a clue what to use for a contest like this. This seems a good one for New years as well! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 1/2/2012 5:47:00 PM I had to look up a couple of the words Joe but it came together perfectly. Hope the resolutions are able to be kept! Login to Reply