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Sorrow Pit

THE SORROW PIT Sorrow burned so deep a hole His feet had disappeared-- Designed a ladder to escape-- Its rungs were elegantly devised of secret Midnight tears. Survival drove him upward-- Escaped with his last breath— Ached for her in every bone, A fool, he taunted death. Dreamed of her at dawning Her hair wild disarray--- Wept for her when waking And cursed the break of day By chance he rode a whirlwind, Jumped the ladder to success Where this climb would lead-- He didn't mind the mess. His children were a sea away Beyond his wildest reach And every lesson he had learned He had no chance to teach. If the course of love is pain Sparsely Spiced with hints of glory, To him, Life seems a thankless meal-- Best digested in a story. V Anderson-Throop 2013

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Date: 8/3/2013 9:37:00 PM
thank you for sharing the deep sorrow in your poem... ~SKAT~
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 8/12/2013 6:47:00 PM
you are one of the few who face the unpleasantries head on.....a telling characteristic! V

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