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Shaft of Light

The sky is black like the night No moon no stars no guiding light The wind is screaming Holding back the sun`s beaming The clouds are sobbing tears from the sky Eyes look to the heavens asking the question why Suddenly a shaft of light blinding all that see Clearing the blackness of a world of what could be A ray of sunshine now envelops the land Telling all being alive is simply grand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/26/2013 8:31:00 PM
Hello, Richard, nice to see this one of yours I had not seen before. Congrats in the contest!!
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:50:00 PM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/26/2013 4:42:00 AM
Congrats. Morgan
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Date: 9/26/2013 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard
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Date: 9/25/2013 9:16:00 PM
lovely win, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/25/2013 5:19:00 PM
congratulations once again... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:38:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:01:00 PM
Richard.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
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Date: 9/24/2013 11:36:00 AM
Richard,, :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:58:00 PM
Richard, , Congratulations!!! Thank you for the wonderful win. :-) Epic, it is. <3 always & forever <3 ''LINDA
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Richard Ferry
Date: 7/24/2013 9:37:00 PM
Always a pleasure entering your contests.
Date: 2/11/2013 9:26:00 PM
nice..PD
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