Sensitivity

There is a certain sad quality To the overwhelming sensitivity With which offers much reality Of course then subsequently Causing hurt feelings with cruelty Emitting out such animousity Against a soul with such frailty Will cause a certain casualty With winners left behind spiritually Cold as a stone internally And blind as a bat visually While the fragile soul will soar endlessly Far, far away from all the negativity

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/27/2010 6:36:00 AM

Another wonderful write Scarlett and good luck if u entered this in the contest .. for they are a great way to have your poetry read and extended on the Soup so all may enjoy... good luck... luv.. Linda-Marie

Date: 5/26/2010 3:24:00 PM

Wonderful use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Insightful poem that I've read a couple of times already. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2010 2:59:00 PM

very nice, Scarlett, the 'ly is a great rhyming sound in English! And it goes so nicely with 'ty too. I love the rhymes of English that are most versatile! Luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/26/2010 11:01:00 AM

Your writing simply amazes me Scarlett. I so enjoy reading it. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 5/26/2010 7:44:00 AM

Smile, how wonderful and creative and lovely this verse is! It is always a pleasure to find a poet or poetess whom wields such a commanding and pretty pen! I see a glimpse of perhaps, much talent within this writer here dear lady and, I love the introspect and wisdom that find...."Have A Very Bright & Lovely Day, Dear Lady, Wrapped In Warmth & Love," John!" ~ "Bye":)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 10:55:00 AM

Sensitivity can be a good thing at times, but it also opens the door to a lot of pain. Perhaps that is why so many artists take their own lives. Compelling monorhyme, Scarlett, one of my favorite forms. This one goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2010 8:26:00 AM

nice write,enjoyed today