Sensitivity

There is a certain sad quality
To the overwhelming sensitivity
With which offers much reality
Of course then subsequently
Causing hurt feelings with cruelty
Emitting out such animousity
Against a soul with such frailty
Will cause a certain casualty
With winners left behind spiritually
Cold as a stone internally
And blind as a bat visually
While the fragile soul will soar endlessly
Far, far away from all the negativity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/27/2010 6:36:00 AM
Another wonderful write Scarlett and good luck if u entered this in the contest .. for they are a great way to have your poetry read and extended on the Soup so all may enjoy... good luck... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/26/2010 3:24:00 PM
Wonderful use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Insightful poem that I've read a couple of times already. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 5/26/2010 2:59:00 PM
very nice, Scarlett, the 'ly is a great rhyming sound in English! And it goes so nicely with 'ty too. I love the rhymes of English that are most versatile! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 11:01:00 AM
Your writing simply amazes me Scarlett. I so enjoy reading it. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:44:00 AM
Smile, how wonderful and creative and lovely this verse is! It is always a pleasure to find a poet or poetess whom wields such a commanding and pretty pen! I see a glimpse of perhaps, much talent within this writer here dear lady and, I love the introspect and wisdom that find...."Have A Very Bright & Lovely Day, Dear Lady, Wrapped In Warmth & Love," John!" ~ "Bye":)
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Date: 5/15/2010 10:55:00 AM
Sensitivity can be a good thing at times, but it also opens the door to a lot of pain. Perhaps that is why so many artists take their own lives. Compelling monorhyme, Scarlett, one of my favorite forms. This one goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2010 8:26:00 AM
nice write,enjoyed today
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